Woah poor kid I want to know what happens next I hope Simon saves his ass

I didn't know that was what depression was like for some folks I went through a bit but that was just pride

Okay that was hilarious. I was laughing so hard everyone gave me odd looks. Has Marty gone insane?
He handcuffed Simon to the bed and just ran out. What's he going to do? I think you portrayed him perfectly.
Though honestly it's seems like the kid is slowly starting to loose it. Gotta love Martys new sarcasm.

Well it's offical...Marty has gone insane. The poor thing XD
Sorry about your broken leg I hope you feel better soon.
I'm not liking Linda in this story she seems like a real
*bleep*
Love how it's going so far and good luck. Excuse me for my language. Simon seems like an interesting charcater maybe he could have a fatherly relationship with marty.
I also hope you put old Biff in this story

I guess you have a talent for brilliant writting when you sleep. Might come in handy one day. Another great chapter I couldn't even write something this in interesting im the middle of the afternoon. So I hope you'll carry this on. Although it seems that Martys starting to loose it a little...
I honestly don't want this story ending with him in a mental hospital. If it does it would be pretty evil but interesting..

I like this story. I'd like to see Marty use the time machine again to fix this family again. Maybe to stop himself pushing his dad out of the way of his granddad car in 1955

hurry for next chapter please. And it was perfect-o portraying Marty, although i wish there was a little more bromance with doc.

I love a good drama and family story, plus BTTF so this story is pretty great :)

You've portrayed Marty fine, I can't find any faults and besides it is fan fiction. Please continue!

This is amazing please continue this. The plot seems interesting

Think it's really good cod no one really knows what it was like for marty living with a different version of his family

You have Marty down pretty well. I hope you write more. :)

This is an interesting story and it'd be cool if you continued it. I really want to know what happens. I think what I like most about the writing is Marty's internal thoughts, especially the use of sarcasm. It's well-written. :D

However, there are some parts that could be structured better... I'm on mobile so I can't point then out right now, but some instances of dialogue are formatted incorrectly. Still a good story though.

That was pretty interesting, please continue