This story makes me laugh so hard, while simultaneously having some of the best descriptions of fight scenes I’ve seen in a long time!

Hello Fahad09. My name is NebulaFiction. Although you have abandoned your story I am here to tell you that your story was and still is a masterpiece. Even though your story was adopted by another person I am here to ask you if I can post YOUR story on my YouTube channel.

The goal of my YouTube channel is to share fictions of all kinds and create a space where authors and readers can enjoy alternate universes, different stories, unique ideas, and give each other a larger reach so that we can all enjoy what we like to do.

Before I post a video I like to ask for permission from the author. Although I add the link to the fanfiction in the description so that everyone can read along, and I add your name so people know who the creator is, I still want you to know what I am doing before I do it.

Thank you for taking the time to consider my request. Hopefully someday you return and continue your writing journey or maybe even come back and finish this one. Please have a wonderful rest of your day.

I really wish this would be continued

Damn, dropping this shit after this chapter. a 40 year old man doesn't have the consciousness to not to be a dick. no wonder his kids killed him.

Bro i died grom laughing this chapter, like im pretty sure i stopped breathing xD

should've taken Sasuke's sharingan

I'm dying of laughter here at poor Tora. The entire sequence kept making me laugh the more I read.

shiver me timbers, I sometimes comeback just to reread this chapter. hope the author didn't die or something.

You know, your fanfic always seem to make sense, its logical, a machine is efficient but you arent using machines to infiltrate and assassin a target, you need a human, the root members need to have their emotions to be humans, even if some may break down from the training, just from this you have already surpassed the majority of naruto fanfic out there. You took the world of a shounen jump thats NARUTO and lead its to a path of "what if Kishimoto wasnt writing a shounen jump".

Now im really interested in his backstory, you have done it, you have made a fanfic where the backstory is actually crucial in the making of the character, people always make their oc "have a new beginning" after dying or isekai to another world, discarding what once was, you didnt discard it, you made it a part of the guy's character

That was amazing, its raining trees, hallelujah

I had this possibility including many others ever since you replaced Hinata with the oc, Jiraiya being female and the full of hate Neji (although without reason to) to be the most chill guy on the planet. You swapped up so many things

The MC is acting with no sense. I don't even know why you added a tragic past where he was a father and was killed by his own son. When you add something it's to make an impact. "He's a grown man and thanks to that he learns quickly" so far so good, but if he really is an adult who even had children, he wouldn't go and punch a 6 year old in the face just for events that haven't happened yet, in fact, he even admits that Kisihimoto edited amd invented events, so he shouldn't assume that Sasuke is how he thinks he is. Aside from the fact that it's impossible for him to see it coming with his great intelligence that his actions have consequences, even more so when he knows that Itachi killed his own family to keep his brother safe.
It would have been better if you didn't even mention that past or say that he's a very old man, since after all he doesn't live up to what you say he is. At least make it make a little sense by changing the past or erasing it completely.

I don't hate him or like him, he's just a lil cringe. Like chill out bro you doin entirely too much

Damn. They can't leave me like this, I'm an addict. 5 years is too long please. I NEED MY DOSE. PLS UPDATE