Hello Fahad09,
thank you for sharing this awesome, exciting, heart warming and well written story.
A smile always finds its way on to my face, be it a happy or sad one, when I come upon all the litte wonderful scenes portraying the relationship between Hikaru and Naruto. Like this introspection piece.
I'm quite thrilled at all the (nija) depth you paint on many of the other characters and your take on how they would look like if they incorporated all the skills and excperience Kishimoto gave them, but never let them have them.
I hope you're doing well, as you haven't updated any of your works since 2020, and that you will hopefully find you muse again. Because I really like to read how this story unfolds and if Hikaru can stay ahead to be more clever than all the big shots that are coming onto the stage or are already lurking on the horizon. As he's just coming to understand more and more that he had more luck in his previous endeavours than he could comprehend or even guessed.
Looking forward to you next installment and wish you all the best until then.
Dc

Oh my. That's a delicious interlude. Heartwarming and yet somewhat creepy. I love it.

One of the best fics on the site. The storytelling, the humor, the characterization is on point. Really wish the author would continue it someday. On one of the previous chapters he said that he was getting tired of the story so I guess I understand even if it is a pity. Anyway 5 stars for me

Minato was a civilian.

The elders probably let the intruder through,
to get rid of Hinata, she could have had slow acting poison in her system, a genjutsu cast on her to make her kill herself or some other means of ending her.
Neji likely knew the truth.

Hikaru is treasured, Hinata reviled.
The rabbit hole gets deeper and deeper.

That was a great read. Quite a different setup from other fics. Hoping for more

I just realised that Hukaru will probably be the one to make the most use out of the Sexy Jutsu to have Jiraya teach him.

I could not stop laughing while I read this chapter!

This was bloody beautiful, literally brought tears to my eyes. Man, you really nailed it! The emotions were all there, and they left me with a feeling of longing and sorrow but that's exactly what you wanted right? If your humor hadn't already sold your writing to me, this scene surely did. You are a brilliant writer, keep up the amazing work!

I have found it. My new favorite fanfic. I love the comedy, the plot, and the writing style. If you ever feel like picking it back up again, I’ll jump right back in!

aint that cute (when you updating)

w please update

W chapter/you should consider writing your own book if these are the typa skills you provide on fanfictions

WILDDDD IM STUNNED HOLY SHIT W BOOK W WRITING W SKILLS W LIFE

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