Wait. What?

Jesus Christ that was horrifying. Welp, it is now confirmed that our mc is legitimately (and not the good kind) insane. While he has good reasons to kill Sasuke, it wasn't the only option and the way he did it was downright bloodthirsty. The human instinct to survive is strong BUT a sane person from earth would, at the very least, think about another way to push Sasuke from his path of revenge, but the mc didn't, he just outright killed him because it was easier that way. So when he killed Sasuke he did become a monster and I hope the mc won't regret his actions in his pursuit of power because everything that everyone does will have consequences.

Wait, hold on. My bad read a section wrongly. Eh, ah well.

Why are you calling her a he when he has no dick? This some mental gymnastics with transgendering to make you feel better about what you are putting the character through?

THE STORY IS COMPLETE of disappointment after the sasuke killing saga. it's focus more on slice of life fluffy love comedy between his team instead of him focusing on pursuing strength to become an independent player like he wanted.

i don't experienced any PROGRESSION AT ALL, all of the progression that I as reader supposed to be experienced is all exist in the background of the story and come conveniently come as infodump pull out from author ass when the situation needed to explain how the the protagonist become strongest suddenly against the adversity.

it's really the worst way to story telling and instead author focus on the slice if life fluffy love comedy between him and naruto or him and his teammate. instead a grinding, the struggle of the practice or training or experiment or research that he do to become stronger like in the early early chapters of the story.

HEY AUTHOR, IF YOU WANT TO MAKE SLICE OF LIFE LOVEY DOVEY COMEDY YOU DON'T NEEDED TO KILL SASUKE, IT'S JUST WASTE ENERGY AND EXPECTATION, at least from me who expected this story as journey of the mc who will become stronger no matter what it cost, instead I GOT, SLIFE OF LIFE LOVEY DOVEY COMEDY STUPID STORY, what a disappointment

the MC IS NOTHING LIKE OROCHIMARU LIKE AT ALL. he doesn't completely devote himself to become stronger, now he just doing STUPID ASS COMEDY WITH HIS TEAMMATE WASTING HIS TIME, CMON AUTHOR YOU WRITING GARBAGE RIGHT NOW, SHOW USE THE PROGGESION OF HIM IN ACCOMPLISING HIS GOAL. because now he done nothing, NOTHING EXCEPT JUST FOOLING AROUND LIKE MORON!

author the interaction between the mc and his team is one of the most useless thing that i ever read. i want to see his progression of mc to accomplish his goal, not slice of life fluffy bullshit that you thrown to my face right now.

man the sasuke killing set the expectation so high for me, and you turned the story into garbage, like a complete garbage.

to be honest it's all become slice of life story now, far different that i expected from someone who have such ambition to become god, and here he is just playing around like a moron. IDK man your story is completely ruin for me.

kakashi is just too overpowered it's started ruining the story for me.

amazing

You really are a rare breed in the world of fanfiction.
An excellent read, even if some of the main tropes are things I usually dont go for, you pull it off very well.

Are you dead and buried? If so climb out your grave cuz I need MOAR

This chapter's opening was a work of art. Kudos.

Wahhh plz do continue this

Blame kakashi model is so good
And lmaooooo omg why do his parents worry about him killing someone and not his safety