Reviews for Second Chance
Brandon Boodoo chapter 2 . 11/11
... waste
GilgameshZasshu chapter 7 . 8/17
No harem! Are you sure that’s Shirou in there? He has Harem Protagonist: EX and E rank luck. At least give a bit of women troubles to the lad!
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
that's I've only talked to you - that's after I've only talked to you

make Ron roared in laughter - make Ron roar in laughter
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
most succeeding - most successful
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
the blood nodded - the blond nodded
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
Shirou didn't really offended - Shirou wasn't really offended

I rest my case. :-)
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
was somehow resemble Matou Shinji - was somehow resembling Matou Shinji
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
Ravenclaws - Ravenclaw

Again, please get an editor to go over the chapters, they need it.
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
those from Ravenclaws - those from Ravenclaw
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
letting you went off - letting you go off
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
what make you - what makes you

Please get an editor, I've noticed a number of sloppily worded sentences and typos.
typo chapter 2 . 7/31
thanks me - thank me
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30
You need an editor, not so much for typos, but there's a number of clumsily worded or almost mangled sentences in this chapter alone that a second pair of eyes would help a lot with.
M-E-S-1276 chapter 1 . 4/15
¿Puedo adoptar la historia?
Batta the Beast chapter 1 . 4/15
Shirou will crush weak Voldy
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