Reviews for Second Chance
Ikasuki chapter 1 . 5/6
Nor even finished first chapter and I am already not confident in the rest of the story... DUmcledore speak like a scarredy little push over, Minerva talk about killing people in bout of anger?

There is AU, and then there is being unable to wright a personnage approximately right so using AU as an excuse to disguise it... I am not certain which it is so far although I have an idea
Brandon Boodoo chapter 2 . 11/11/2021
... waste
GilgameshZasshu chapter 7 . 8/17/2021
No harem! Are you sure that’s Shirou in there? He has Harem Protagonist: EX and E rank luck. At least give a bit of women troubles to the lad!
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
that's I've only talked to you - that's after I've only talked to you

make Ron roared in laughter - make Ron roar in laughter
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
most succeeding - most successful
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
the blood nodded - the blond nodded
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
Shirou didn't really offended - Shirou wasn't really offended

I rest my case. :-)
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
was somehow resemble Matou Shinji - was somehow resembling Matou Shinji
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
Ravenclaws - Ravenclaw

Again, please get an editor to go over the chapters, they need it.
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
those from Ravenclaws - those from Ravenclaw
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
letting you went off - letting you go off
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
what make you - what makes you

Please get an editor, I've noticed a number of sloppily worded sentences and typos.
typo chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
thanks me - thank me
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2021
You need an editor, not so much for typos, but there's a number of clumsily worded or almost mangled sentences in this chapter alone that a second pair of eyes would help a lot with.
M-E-S-1276 chapter 1 . 4/15/2021
¿Puedo adoptar la historia?
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