Reviews for Second Chance
PLEASE READ ME chapter 9 . 5/18
Shiro is a empty being, harry potter is a being of high emotions by harry waking up he could merge with shiro become one being able to feel think and interact but with shiro being a spiritual splint and upgrade separate unbalanced, together complete, one compansats for the other, filling holes in each other soul.
Guest chapter 17 . 5/17
Reality marble the Goblet and destroy it. There, problem solved. Though maybe he doesn't have it any more?
Guest chapter 16 . 5/17
You know despite it being an entirely different Harry, Albus knowing this, multiple Death Eaters dying and the whole thing with Greengrass this still happens is.. Weird.

Don't be afraid to change canon just because it will take a good deal of creativity to go on the unbeaten path.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/17
Having a hard time getting invested simply because he leaves the 'current' friends and then ignores why to make friends with others. He also got really attached to them for no real reason it seems as we weren't shown them interacting and becoming friends much at all.

Kind of felt meh for not only the reason but what is happening.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/17
And nothing happens or comes form an attack on the mind, an attempt at mind rape. *Sighs* That was a major let down and felt oddly hand waved away to make the two continue as they are.
Argonaut986 chapter 20 . 5/4
The escape was so EPIC! Please update as soon as possible.
Argonaut986 chapter 19 . 5/3
It’s either bagmam, crouch junior, or karkarauth.
Argonaut986 chapter 18 . 5/3
I see a budding friendship.
Argonaut986 chapter 17 . 5/3
Fleur is confused about her dealings.
Argonaut986 chapter 16 . 5/3
Things are about to be more aggravating, for Shirou.
Argonaut986 chapter 15 . 5/3
Fleur is wrong, regarding her opinion.
Argonaut986 chapter 14 . 5/3
Things are going to be interesting.
Argonaut986 chapter 13 . 5/3
Things are becoming complicated.
Argonaut986 chapter 12 . 5/3
Talk about good timing.
Argonaut986 chapter 11 . 5/3
That’s a suprise.
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