Reviews for Second Chance
Greer123 chapter 20 . 12/12
This is a very interesting story to me.
ippon chapter 20 . 12/6
I liked your story, but your dialogs werent the best.
DalkonCledwin chapter 1 . 11/26
Well I didn't even get half way down the chapter before I lost interest in this fic. I could have dealt with Shirou being reincarnated as Harry... what I cannot deal with is a Dementor enabled body-jacking like the one you seem to be walking towards here. That is all sorts of bad juju.
Seraphim209 chapter 20 . 10/28
Story itself is great, but the dialogue is really, really flat. Everyone speaks the same way. At one point, mcgonagal and dumbledore both spoke like a teenager, and for four paragraphs I thought it was just mcgonagal talking.
alexkellar chapter 20 . 10/14
I must say, I was a little skeptical when I saw the combination of worlds haha. although in both universes can be used magic, do not imagine that they made such a good combination, was really enjoyable story. if I do not see wrong, did you conclude there? ... a pity. I also want to congratulate you for such a good job, I did a little marathon to complete the whole story, it was worth it, I enjoy it a lot. keep up the good work !
Storm0719 chapter 20 . 10/4
interesante historia sabes me párese un poco exagerado actuar así y matar al dragón pudo buscar otra alternativa y evitarse todo eso pero bueno dado las circunstancias que se puede esperar y que falso director topando todo humm, bueno espero ver mas futuras actualizaciones no te demores por favor
BrawlBroMario chapter 20 . 9/29
I think it's more of a crime to not update this story, how dare you write so much to the best part of the story only to call it quits. For the love of God please update man...
shadyxlr chapter 16 . 9/26
Personally I love this story I found it today and am binge reading enjoying it.
Guest chapter 19 . 9/17
You're seriously fucked.
Literally fucked. Metaphorically fucked.
Guest chapter 13 . 9/17
Yup, ya seriously dun goof, Shiroo
Guest chapter 9 . 9/17
Guest chapter 8 . 9/17
Ya dun goof Shiroo Perty
Skeletickles chapter 20 . 8/5
DracoArtemisLeopin chapter 1 . 6/29
Hey, this story's not for me, but I will say that with the exception of a few spelling errors, this seems to be quite well written, so far at least. Good luck.
LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 15 . 6/19
Wth... wats with the sudden racist shirou.
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