Reviews for Dimensional Links |
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![]() ![]() Wow! I love this story! The re-write is great so far I love the old parts too! Five stars great job!:D |
![]() ![]() Don't worry, writing romance is hard for me too... Which is great when you're dabbling in an x reader fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol when I saw my name in the review replies of chapter 28 I was like "What?" When I found the review I realized it was still from the original chapter. I feel the need to apologize for my cringey fifteen year old self. TRG used to be an overpowered OC of mine that I tried to fix recently. (Its still an ongoing process.) Sorry Changeling! (Good luck with the universe!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Should we call Dusk's attraction "Puppy Love"? Cause that's what his adoration looks like to me. Great chapter, as always. Not sure how much caffeine is required to write Lore's though, as good character writing means being the character. Makes me wonder if Stephen King should be on a watch list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this was a pleasant surprise to wake up to! Had fun with this chapter. Everyone being terrified of Midna's magic was hilarious, and I find it funny how both Dusk and his version of Ganondorf are just so done with this shit. As for Dusk crushing on Zelda; I couldn't tell you. The closest thing I've written to romance was well... On the "implied and combined with drama because plot" side. Personally I don't get it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The romance bits got a smile out of me, so I think it worked out. To be fair, the Heroes never once agreed to anything. They are in animal form and not capable of human speech at the moment, thus they cannot be legally bound be verbal agreement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOUR ALIVE! Also what on God's green earth made Ganondorf think tag was a great idea to motivate Zant with? |
![]() ![]() This is genius. Where’s the rest? MoreMoreMoreMoreMorePlease |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Rin, sweeter than this tangerine I'm eating. What a nice idea, mashing everything into BotW through goddess power. Yahaha. |
![]() ![]() Two things I noticed about the underwater part of the Zant fight: Speck has some Zora flippers that you didn't comment on, and there's also the fact that Sketch is completely submerged in water and somehow doesn't freak out (if that was on purpose then wow that's some good restraint on Sketch's part). I don't know if that's something you wanted to call attention to or not, but I figured I'd let you know anyways. I love the story so far, keep up the great work! (Every time I read the Original Ganon battle (Chapter 26) I audibly laugh) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story! Though, I don't understand how Wind had the King Of Red Lions considering if he's looking for Bellum, he should be on a steam boat with Linebeck and Celia. Plus that whole fight against Bellum supposedly takes place in another world? And he has no idea how he got there other than that it involved a ghost ship, and he only got to leave that world after defeating Bellum, waking up on the Pirate Ship. But eh, I love that little red boat, so I don't care that much. |
![]() ![]() i will describe the entire story in one word drumroll please...gripping! so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, is it possible to just teleport to Majora with Realm's wandering? Given that the others don't get too sick if it takes too many tries. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda Ironic that Lore said that, Bellum literally translates into War |