Reviews for Dimensional Links |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really really REALLY freaking love what you did with Realm, the redo of this chapter had me in giggle fits when I wasn't completely immersed in the adventure, and it was admittedly a little weird to not have Shadow partake in a Ganon battle. Timeline shenanigans not withstanding, that is his maker and even if it wasn't, you'd think the name and appearance would be enough to provoke him. Regardless, is excellent. This continues to be my favorite Zelda story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really glad that Realm's ability to get lost has some actual explanation. To be honest, I was kind of getting tired of it being just because of 'the Universe is weird'. |
![]() ![]() There's a couple things; first, about the Fierce Deity. I don't know what he's like in Majora's Mask, since I've never really had a way to play the game (although now I have a DS, so now I do. Yay!). However, it is my understanding that the Fierce Deity is between 10 and 15 feet tall. Naturally, that causes some problems with the story, which I think is fantastic as it is, so I'm not asking that you change that detail. I just figured I'd share that on the possible chance that I'm either wrong and might be corrected, or that now you're learning something. The other thing is... great story! This has quickly worked its way up to one of my favorite stories, fanfiction or otherwise. To put that into a little bit of context, it should be noted that I'm very, very picky about stories that make their way into my favorites list, which is a large reason why I don't have an actual account at this time (there haven't been enough stories worthy of favorite status for me to justify it). I was a little hesitant at first, especially about Lore, but he's found his way into my three favorites (who happen to be the Triad, coincidentally enough. Suffice it to say, I liked them before they were the leaders). The moment Lore made it to favorite status was the Vaati fight. And now... I'm awkward at ending things, so I'll just say "Toodles!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know what makes the day nicer? Lore being very lost and excellent back and forth scene changes. Farore having more headaches. Wonderfully and beatifully insane happenings with details picked out of the Zelda games like random tenants. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been anxiously waiting for an update to this story. And i loved it. Please see this story out to the end. Ps: So, you are left an open ended plot line with the old men in the lair, and your first thought is ganon rents to them... You are a strange little rin... Dont ever change |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pretty sure Realm needs to be tied to someone in order to stop him getting lost. And of course he'd probably get *that* Link lost too. Good rewrite, as per usual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this thank you so much YOU WEAPONIZED HIS GETTING LOST I DIDN'T KNOW I NEEDED THIS BUT THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU |
![]() ![]() ![]() changeling what have you done |
![]() ![]() ![]() What do you mean by the note? What changes? Im honestly confused here |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, as usual. Realm learning to use his magic is like a textbook 'turn weakness into strength'. He learns to not exactly control it, but use what he has and turn it into victory. The explanation on how his teleportation works is interesting. So he's attracted to places with a lot of ambient magic? This seems like a mage's dream. Someone looking for a place with ambient magic could just hitch a ride with him, along with some cartographers and survival experts. What happens when he's in an area that makes people get lost, like the Lost Woods? I think that Sketch does have Pegasus Boots. It's not mandatory, but you get them if you sneak up on the thief in Kakariko Village, and they're good for finding Maimais in trees. |
![]() ![]() ![]() DISCORD FOR THIS?! YES! (Oh btw just pet spaces in between some of the link it'll work) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "After all… you're just one little Link separated from his Chain. How much of a fight could you possibly give me?" Just how long have you been holding on to that one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just so you know, I'm dying. I barely got a moment to breathe all chapter, I was giggling so hard. |
![]() ![]() And, now that I discovered the logic of Labrynnian, I found myself scrutinizing Holodese, which, in turn, led me to find its pattern as well... now I want to see what the other languages have in the way of patterns. However, I'm lacking a little material in that way, so I guess I'll just have to keep reading. |
![]() ![]() I meant Labrynnian... whoops. Whatevs, it gets the idea across. |