Immediately after Demise stops yelling at the villains in his head, he states,

"Majora's current lack of a physical presence will only be a minor impediment in his ability to torture you all within in inch of your lives. However, he is not likely to stop there, and is much more likely to go all the way."

shouldn't he say it rather than him?

Fashionista (Fashionisto?) Wind. Yes. Yes. Yes 100.

Yep, that about describes the Great Fairy

AHHHHHHH BABY LINKS YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

/takes notes on Red's puppy looks/
/takes 12 hours to fangirl/
/takes one week wishing that all they Links were real/
Excellent chapter! Your entire story is 10000000/10!

/laughs intensely/
This is one of my favorite chapters. How I need to hack BOTW to turn Link into a bubble-shooting Deku Scrub riding Wolf Link while 90% of all other Links run around me wreaking havoc.
On second thought, I need to go find a professional hacker XD

Realm has found his spirit animal.

LORE NOOOOOOOOOOO HE'S THE ONE LINK I CAN RELATE TO STABILITY
/cries/

bIg GiNgEr

You are one of my new favorite people

POKÉMON REFERENCE YASSSSSSSS

You did a really amazing job for finding each Link an animal and writing the struggle of them getting use to the animal they’re now. I can definitely see how Steam would be...ah, a very tricky concept to find an animal for. Since his life revolves around, well...non-organic forms made of wood and metal (...and spirit stuff).

(I might be a bit over dramatic, but this is the first time I’ve read in any fanfic/book someone saying “bless you” to another person. And I think it’s an awesome and refreshing change. Also, as a Christian, I can very much relate the automatic impulse to say “bless you” whenever somebody sneezes.)

No matter how hard Wind tries, I’m not sure if teaching Realm the ways of reading the almighty Map is even going to prove successful...with the extreme levels of how many times he can get lost and/or lose things.

Also, the only way to cope in Realm’s position IS to stay optimistic. It probably took the two years of his...quite lost wandering to master that coping mechanism (that poor kid haha...). I feel more bad that Realm didn’t know that running for five days straight, or finding your destination after a vast...oh so very vast amount of time was UNNATURAL before he adventured with the other Links...and realized it only took some of them two days or less to get through a temple.

...Y’know, that probably sounded like a 99.99% impossible miracle to him. But because of his sheer optimism, that 1% was born.

Thank you for your awesomeness Changeling! Have an amazing day!

Hi yes it's me zap again I'm just here to ask you...how long does it usually take to write a chapter im curious because im kinda thinking about making my own secduale for something in working on and what not

Reasons why I love this chapter:
1.) Malladus, I state, has. a. mustache.

2.)He has grooming techniques he does FOR that mustache.

3.) Sealing with rubble...with RUBBLE! (And I thought the sealing spike was hard enough hahahaaa...oh how naive I was. Gen’s got it worse than us video gamers, indeed.)

4.) Writing a full-blown, Action-packed, Heart-WRENCHING TRAIN BATTLE is HARD. I gotta give you credit for that. For that, AND succeeding GLORIOUSLY with gorgeous and beautiful results!

5.) Lore’s never-ceasing ability to find all the many ways that a villain can break a Law in a very, VERY loud tone, or continuously flatter the villain and talk about their grooming etiquette and, err...”brands”... (cedar wood chips exfoliate his head from any ash while making his luxurious flames grow quicker, and the oxygen/hydrogen blend boosts the bounce and volume to it to create a stunningly healthy glow— I see where Malladus is going.)

6.) The very well written teamwork between them all and how the whole chapter runs so smoothly and overall AWESOMELY is just so downright awesomest. The chapter kind of just “shoot the(/my) face in the face” with its absolute greatness.

7.) (last but not least) Everything of/in this chapter is pure golden. Which means the mind of the author who has made this chapter is golden! Thank you!

You are my new source for all happiness in the world, from Skyloft to the Wind Waker oceans.