Reviews for The Vanishing Cabinet Of Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() having gotten to chapter 10 in this gem of a story I am loving it so far. My compliments. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, but in Chapter 15, the Grangers are driving a 4 door Cadillac, which weren't sold until around 2018 as a Crossover SUV, as Cadillacs were not imported as they were always considered to be too big for UK roads, and inferior to German, British, and other European luxury cars. If they had one, it's only because they were eccentric (not likely) and had bought one from an American Serviceman / Soldier or someone who had imported it. They were far more likely to have a BMW, Mercedes, Jaguar, or other European sedan as Dentists. |
![]() ![]() And I’m out. I hate harem stories. They always suck, always. I also hate the idea of forced marriage. I think magically enforced betrothal agreements to be nothing more than slavery contracts. And I will always think such things are evil. James potter deserves to burn in hell for forcing Harry into relationships he had nothing to do with. |
![]() ![]() Please come back to this. I just found it and I'm loving it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed your story. hope you someday finish. thank you for writing it |
![]() ![]() ITS BEEN YEARS! ARE YOU ALIVE? |
![]() ![]() This was superb and I hope you do the world a favour and complete it. It would be awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When will you update the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() when are you gonna update this story!? I know a lot of authors don't like to be asked but I wanna know what happens, please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Outstanding story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah, that's fucking dumb she could just tell the public that fudge is trying to cover up for albus and if she gets fired, he's fucked |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did ANOTHER reread. Still a shame that you left this story. But, as I read it again, the more I am disappointed that you involved Tonks in the harem. I like Teddy and am sad that he will never be in this story. Also I think Hermione is too pushy when it comes to Harry having more relationships other than what was planned by his parents. And giving Tracy children? With how snobbish that society is, their children will hav a rough time, wife's mistress or not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does Harry refer to the adults as Lord Castor and Lady Illiana, but they refer to the teen as Lord Potter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope this eventually continues |
![]() ![]() ![]() ~~Mighty Work~~ |