""That was absolutely brilliant, Harry!" Hermione said."
authors congratulating themselves...

just the veritaserum and end this... and if there's a way to Legilimence then who cares about the magical vow - yet another way for Dumbledore to confine Granger for Imperius

i find it funny that everyone is a specialist on how long do the rats live and those specialists question the others about: "How couldn't you know this fact?!"

sorta too much description and PoVs while too few story movement

"The Ministry of Magic didn't allow Honor Vows on underage wizards and witches for that reason alone."
Even if not allowed theres still a way to just do it and let the others accept it. Like when Ron casted it in his childhood.

well, wouldn't Weasley as a pureblood name be able to get his hands on the veritaserum or, say, just use the magic oath to easily show that he was telling the truth. And Dumbledore would've helped him a lot to remove Granger. He still has his influence. In case with Sirius there's been a different setup.

reading about the same sh.t over and over again is tedious

wouldn't soothsayer mean more like soothing the pain while speaking at the water or removing a disease. Sort of like an enchantment to transfer own will to a subject that'll transfer it to a person or via the world to the person.

so far it felt like Hr is the main char in here

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en realidad Sirius no puede ser acusado de intentar matar a Snape basado en el hecho de que no lo obligó a ir donde Remus estaba convertido en Hombre Lobo, el fue allí por su propia voluntad entonces no puede ser acusado de haber intentado matarlo.

Oh great, rape permission slips, otherwise known as betrothal contracts. And the story was actually readable till now. Just slaughter those entire family lines down to the last and you are free of those contracts, simple.

Why would he when there was a chance the Basilisk would kill the Granger Mudblood, and maybe a few like her along the way!

I never understood some shit like that

Consider this scenario, two students walking in a corridor, one Muggleborms one pro prueblood kid, a Basilisk comes around a corner, BOTH OF THEM WOULD BE DEAD, it's not like a Basilisks gaze only kills Muggleborns and half bloods, IT KILLS ANY LIVING THING IN ITS WAY

can you please update this?

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