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![]() ![]() ![]() So jaspers ass is that good huh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor jasper |
![]() ![]() Happy new year! Seen your story for the 2nd time now. Nope, not going to nag you for an update, in these trying times, we all need to survive. I hope you and your family is okay now that the pandemic is even worse because of a new covid strain. chapter 9 is already an update for me. Last i read it, it was chapter 5. Keep up the good work! Like your humor by the way :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I love this so much. Really looking forward to when time allows you to update more, because it really is a treat of a story. |
![]() ![]() This story is absolutely hilarious and a really good read! I do hope you plan on finishing it someday, but either way I'm putting it on my "faces" list. Thanks for writing something so interesting and fun! |
![]() ![]() What fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This entire thing is brilliantly done and absolutely hysterical! I completely loved this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rereading this was a great escape from reality right now. Thanks :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! So, so funny! Loved it! Please, please, please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How could you do this to me |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in love with this story. Awesome story. Thx for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice story. Hope you write more! Thanks. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, but can we talk about the scene with the Lich at the dragon reserve? The term "oriental" is considered to be perjorative and more appropriate to describe a vase or a rug (think about it-when was the last time you heard someone from the U.S. or Europe described as Occidental?). Later, you write that he looks "Asian" but that is a huge area-a Sri Lankan looks nothing like a Japanese person, who looks nothing like a Chinese person. Better to say "East Asian" or better still, pick a specific country (the Lich could look Korean, or Filipino, or the like). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Lucifer as comic relief! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering what would become of the Dursleys. |