Reviews for Trouble's Children: One's Chaos, Two's Anarchy
TBread81 chapter 4 . 6/30/2021
I love it hope someday that we get more
the-loststone chapter 4 . 3/25/2020
I like the adoption story line. It makes sense to me that she would want them away from charming and the criminal lifestyle. If she thought they would be adopted by a stable family I think she would have done it. Based on s1, Gemma was really hostile and encouraged Jax to be part of the club, probably stopping/discouraging him from leaving with her when she went to college. So she would have tried to ensure her kids weren't part of that life, even if they weren't with her.

So does Gracie need like a transplant or something...?

Hope you come back to this
Yo chapter 4 . 4/11/2019
I am thinking u should keep the adoption storyline tbh
Entermagicalrealms chapter 4 . 2/26/2019
Hey I really liked the start of this story! I would love to read your rewrite. I think you should keep the adoption story line. I really like it!
Lexxxloubell chapter 4 . 12/30/2018
You should have it so that she gives birth before leaving.
yo chapter 4 . 11/18/2018
I think you should keep the adoption storyline.
ms. Jaicee lee chapter 4 . 10/4/2018
I think you should stick with the San Diego adoption side it will offer up some interesting angsty scenes. I love the story so far though.
BohemianBlues chapter 4 . 10/2/2018
I think Tara having attempted to have the twins adopted provides an even more interesting storyline. I would like to see the twins at the current age you’re portraying them. Maybe there appearance could take place further into the shows storyline. Otherwise, maybe having them be younger would work better if you’restarting the story based on the events of season 1.

I can’t wait to see what you have next for!
llegacy chapter 4 . 9/24/2018
Have Tara keep them but make them a bit younger.. can't wait to read the new story..
Guest chapter 4 . 9/17/2018
Definitely think that you should keep Jax’s in the dark about the twins, that way it’ll keep the drama.
emma217 chapter 4 . 9/16/2018
So far everything Sounds good. Them being put up for adoption gives it some drama with jax finding out hopefully you continue it
debra.joines chapter 4 . 9/12/2018
Can’t wait for the rewrite I think you should have Tara keeping them instead of putting them up for adoption
Storybrooketofrasersridge chapter 4 . 9/9/2018
You should definitely have Tara keep them and her finish medical school oh maybe make them younger.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/9/2018
Have Tara keep them and maybe they should be like 10-11 years old instead :))
SOALOVEATL chapter 4 . 9/9/2018
I like the story the way it is, but think maybe have her come back to charming after her 8 years of school and maybe like 3 years of residency. Let the kids be around 10 or 11 and she finds out that they were never adopted and goes to find them.
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