ah yes promethus can sit in a star cronosphere but 4 little peices of metal hurt the shields... pathetic author fiat

no way 12 ft stops an asgard beam... what nerfing for author fiat this is embarassing

I've greatly enjoyed your story.
Thank you for sharing it with us.

this is a good story. i just found it

5th of may is a good day for a birthday

Man, I just love a good Extermiatus.

hard to believe 8 years have passed still a good story glad to see your grammar gets better every chapter.

doing another reread always love it

Every time I read this chapter I always chuckle at the statement Colonial’s statement that teleportation isn't real and is dreams of sci-fi. Their FTL drive is literally a teleportation device that moves a ship near instantly from one location to another without crossing a physical space. thats basically the text book definition, I figured Baltar would have at least pointed this out. . . Ah naivety, what a precious state of mind.

Meh, the Ragnarok was incredibly disappointing. Doesn’t make sense to have all those safeguards for what it does imo.

I've read this story twice now and have enjoyed it both times.

This story has been finished but something i noticed in it annoyed me lol

Mrs. O’Neill is a perfectly good way to address her people don’t go around calling people Doctor

Sure sometimes is proper to address someone as Dr. O’Neill but most wouldn’t especially a friend

A human loader is not faster than an autoloader, on the contrary. The human might be able to load the first two a bit faster, by taking risks, but he will soon tire and slow down.

Still loving this story, mistakes and all.

Thanks.

Hello, I just read your author's note.
I have mild dyslexia, and my grammar is shot, too.
I have kept reading because this is a good story.
Somehow, I raised a budding author and marvel at the hard work y'all do for your craft.
Keep up the excellent storytelling. For me, that is what this story is.