Your writing improved a lot over the years. I hope you are not done.

The second you made Harry allow the crow to hold a blade to his neck, you lost me as a reader.

What can I expect from this literally godly wizard who will STILL lose to a common man when the plot requires it?

It's just not interesting.

i love this story. Its the best crossover ive ever read. Please come back to us. I need to know how it ends. i need to read more.

excellent story.. thanks!

I hate seeing great works that haven't been updated in ages. Especially ones where the author gives no indication they're taking a break or going on hiatus for a bit. Just makes you assume the worst.

Haha, dude, you write, "I don't like it when characters make a decision solely for the sake of the plot," but Harry's decision to join the Free People, even without seeing the rest of the world, sounds like it's just what the plot ordered.

Nonetheless, the second chapter is a whole lot better than the garbage dump of words in the first. Seems like the plot's flowing smoothly, at a slow pace, and it's kinda interesting. I'm a bit wary of Harry getting all these cheat Death gear when he's transported to this world, but I guess it's all fair game until he starts amassing a dragon army, finding a stash of a hundred magic eggs in some backwater spot. Hope, you will not ruin the story.

Hey, mate, this thing's a whopping 7,000 words! Are you sure we need that much for a prologue/chapter 1? Not saying the story's bad or anything from the get-go. It's just, after the first thousand words, it got a bit tedious. I mean, do I really need all this info about this alternate Harry world if he's just gonna end up in another world in the next chapter? How much of this text is gonna matter down the line? Maybe we should just scrap this chapter altogether and sprinkle in flashbacks when they actually matter during the "questing" in "Game of Thrones"? Honestly, I couldn't quite sink my teeth into this chapter. From the whole word barrage, all I caught was it's an alternate Harry, basically an original character in his name, and he's sort of a decent wizard. Then there's a scuffle, an explosion, and bam, new world!)))

Thank you for your story. It is very easy to read and very captivating. Your blend of Harry Potter and GoT is briliant.

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Wow so you just completely beefed up the opposition to the point where every one of them is on par with or stronger than Harry... that's not even mentioning the Night King. I was really enjoying this story but it seems the ending will be convoluted garbage like this. Goodbye.

One of the best Game of Thrones stories I've ever seen, the ending was a bit bad because we all want a pair with the female protagonists like Sansa, Daenerys or Margaery, but everything was well worked, I hope that someday this will have a sequel.

Story hit the wall.

Harry Potter or any real wizard cam beat three walkers.

Too bad. It was fun while it lasted.

Why didn't Harry read the Maester's mind like why would he ever trust the person that is just another stupid decision he's made without thinking.

An unfinished story.
Nor the best logic for it. He goes travelling the world for 13 years. Comes back to England to realise he doesn't want to be there due to the expectations and responsibilities but loves travelling.
Gets sent to a new world and states " I love traveling and this is a whole new world" proceeds to stay in the first place he arrived, Set up a settlement and be the guy in charge... completely invalidating the intro chapters
All in all it's OK but not great, unfinished tho so takes it from a 6/10 to a 4/10

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