Reviews for The Difference One Man Can Make
Suspect42 chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Harry being away for a decade and only writing to Tonks breaks SoD. He has not even seemed to have drifted apart which is not normal when out of contact so long voluntarily and is weirdly comfortable re-inserting himself in their life. You would have been better off simple having Harry constantly touring the world with only yearly stops back home for rest while being constantly in contact with friends who he shares everything he comes across.

You went kind of cliche in having Harry travel the world learning different kinds of magic. Much like technology I would suspect the core magical theory of these unique magics would have already been integrated in other cultures since some one before Harry would have seen the benefits. Of course in the same instance there is a certain allure of learning the original version in order to gain a better understanding of its roots and any information that got lost in interpretation. The idea of magically strengthening the body and battle awareness is too useful for other wizards to have not brought back to their homes though over the years could have easily been stripped of seemingly useless cultural aspects which Harry who is combat focused could have then wanted to learn.
GetRektNuub chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
well nice story ,it is. see where it goes ,I must .
omega shadow's chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
like the chapter hope for more
mmayank chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
north of the wall...
he sees the wilding all fighting in between and he thinks to unite them...
the white walkers are not there now(roberts rebellion).
after many years the united tribe set up a village with harry as the king, then there is sighting of white walkers so he prepares the troop to get ready.
when the king comes to winterfall so as to ask ned stark to open the gate,so that the wildings may come.
During that time bran falls and ned tells harry that if he cures bran then he will allow them to come...
thus from here the main plot begins.
he may or may not support robb against lannisters or he may form his own force.
he is the master of death thus he ages very slowly...
IV Legacy of Poseidon chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
karthik9 chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
qwertypous chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
awesome! is it possible for harry to become more younger when he arrived in gof universe? please do a cersei and harry pairing.. you know it would be awesome during robert rebellion they both meet and fall in loved and because of some reasons cersei need to leave harry and then years later cersei would be surprise to meet harry again in the north and the romance would start again (but jamie still would be the father of cersei children ).. hehe.. oh by the way i think this is also good story if you not make it a crossover story you can just continue harry life after he return to his homeland.
Deathstance chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
It's a good set up. Good luck with where you take it.
keroblade chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
South of the wall! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Very good
coolgirl chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Nice, I can't wait to see more of this. I am assume that you are going to write on prompt 12( hopefully) or 2.
guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Like it. There is a glaring lack of good asoiaf hp crossover. Hope u make it an empire building story so Harry takes over. Like the start of the timeline as it gives time for Harry to build so he can make a substantial impact. And that u continue to finish it.
FarceFox chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
I think that you set up the story quite well, enough information on the Harry Potter side of things without feeling too much like an info-dump. It would be cool if you have Harry south of the wall and influencing the rebellion, but I will read either way. I am looking forward to your next chapter.
thunder18 chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Great chapter Update soon
ficreader2011 chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
hope harry doesn't bow down to anyone in westeros AND ACTUALLY USES HIS MAGIC unlike other harry in westeros 't wait for update
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