Reviews for Reiteration
worom001 chapter 13 . 9/9
I really hate Adel in this fic. I want to say that's what you intended, right? But I'm genuinely surprised he didn't turn around and slam her head into the wall with a significant portion of his aura. I mean, he's done significantly more to Cardin just for pulling at a girls ears, with less incentive, AND FAR far less sleep deprivation. 35 hours of sleep deprivation makes you do incredibly irrational actions, and I think him getting incredibly mad at getting dragged around, forced to play charades, hear that she purposefully invited the team KNOWING that Hrcn had a history of kidnapping a faunus just because AND doing that finger thing she did to him? He should've had a very angry and explosive, physically, reaction. I would know, because I've done very irrational things like blowing up physically even sleep deprived for 30 hours. It just doesn't make sense for him to be so tame. I think that's the only part of this story that's been a bit of a letdown honestly, so good on you.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/26
This whole fic is trash
Guest chapter 3 . 6/17
All this drama is annoying to read
Kodaking chapter 5 . 5/4
This is so corny dawg ahahahahaha
Kodaking chapter 2 . 5/4
damn bro cant catch a break
Kodaking chapter 1 . 5/4
RedTheVariant chapter 5 . 5/1
nah fuck yang
RedTheVariant chapter 5 . 5/1
yo know i was gonna praise this. but then the bullshit eith yang crying? nah. this is "realism"? funny
Khim Ian Suelto chapter 4 . 11/19/2022
Ehhhh, is this fanfic just gonna follow the cannon with an extra character? Because I’d rather just watch the official series.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2022
Mc is too sappy doesn't adapt well so it's boring
lmc9389 chapter 47 . 9/19/2022
I didn’t realize it was abandoned
lmc9389 chapter 31 . 9/19/2022
They overreacted to him. That combo was more potent than expected but they didn’t react the same when pyrrha just lethal force multiple times internationally
lmc9389 chapter 30 . 9/19/2022
Emerald played him good
lmc9389 chapter 27 . 9/19/2022
I’m surprised oz lets this shit show happen in his school
lmc9389 chapter 24 . 9/18/2022
He didn’t actually try to kill jaune. His actions could have made his death more likely tho
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