I really hate Adel in this fic. I want to say that's what you intended, right? But I'm genuinely surprised he didn't turn around and slam her head into the wall with a significant portion of his aura. I mean, he's done significantly more to Cardin just for pulling at a girls ears, with less incentive, AND FAR far less sleep deprivation. 35 hours of sleep deprivation makes you do incredibly irrational actions, and I think him getting incredibly mad at getting dragged around, forced to play charades, hear that she purposefully invited the team KNOWING that Hrcn had a history of kidnapping a faunus just because AND doing that finger thing she did to him? He should've had a very angry and explosive, physically, reaction. I would know, because I've done very irrational things like blowing up physically even sleep deprived for 30 hours. It just doesn't make sense for him to be so tame. I think that's the only part of this story that's been a bit of a letdown honestly, so good on you.

This whole fic is trash

All this drama is annoying to read

This is so corny dawg ahahahahaha

damn bro cant catch a break

:(

nah fuck yang

yo know i was gonna praise this. but then the bullshit eith yang crying? nah. this is "realism"? funny

Ehhhh, is this fanfic just gonna follow the cannon with an extra character? Because I’d rather just watch the official series.

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Mc is too sappy doesn't adapt well so it's boring

I didn’t realize it was abandoned

They overreacted to him. That combo was more potent than expected but they didn’t react the same when pyrrha just lethal force multiple times internationally

Emerald played him good

I’m surprised oz lets this shit show happen in his school

He didn’t actually try to kill jaune. His actions could have made his death more likely tho