Reviews for Persephone
searching4hallows chapter 2 . 10/5
oh wow, that legit gave me goosebumps and made me a little nauseous! i can tell Im in for a wild ride. Excited to see how this unfolds!
Schnuck chapter 32 . 10/4
Feiy chapter 32 . 9/30
I recognize the redundancy in pointing this out, yet I feel I’d be remiss not to mention how remarkably well written this was. It was spectacularly dark, truly everything you promised/warned it would be in the first chapter, needless to say, I very much enjoyed that this wasn’t the typical redemption story. I was admittedly a tad skeptical about how heavily time traveling would play into the story but gradually grew pleasantly surprised by the way in which you used it. An example being the alternate timeline where she went back in an attempt to change Tom’s path and the way in which it so dramatically backfired, ultimately ending in tragedy. In more recent chapters I couldn’t help but imagine how fried Hermione’s brain likely was from containing the memories of a number of lives.

Speaking of Hermione, I loved your creation of this dark version of her, you really pulled it off in a believable way, particularly by adding things like her telling herself that a normal person shouldn’t enjoy seeing the torture of Avery. Persephone was a fantastic choice for Hermione’s alias; I too favor the idea of a dark queen with power over life and death rather than the meek victim of a kidnapping. On top of everything, the descriptions of magic were phenomenal, the more recent addition of blood magic especially blew me away. Your young Tom Riddle went above and beyond any expectation I came into this with, from that first meeting where we saw his charm together with the cracks in his well-constructed mask. There was never any question that this was the young dark lord, made plausible by his flaws just as well as his power of command. This is someone still coming into his power, he could be taken out of his comfort zone and prove to be petulant, unused to anyone disobeying him. To have those flaws on full display and still manage to write such a seductive character is undoubtedly a difficult thing to achieve. The other characters were interesting too, whether they were younger versions of their canon selves or entirely created for this work it all came together to create a cohesive story that very much felt as if it belonged in the Harry Potter universe. Abraxas was a favorite of mine, his development as he faced inner turmoil at finding out Hermione didn’t come from a magical family. Then his desire to help her while still showing some of the cowardice we see in his descendants.

That final scene in chapter 32 was nothing less than a masterpiece, so wonderfully suspenseful. I always say I’d like to see stories completed but this one begs for an ending in a way I have possibly never encountered. I can’t help but feel eager to read about Hermione creating her first Horcrux. All in all, I find myself vaguely regretting that I chose to read this one as the first for this pairing because I truly can’t imagine anything surpassing it. It simply roped me in until I was thoroughly enamored and far beyond the ability to restrain myself from obsessively reading it to completion. Obviously, I could go on and on, any mistakes I noticed were quickly swallowed up by everything that worked so exactly right. I was saddened to hear about the health problems you’ve been suffering with, I sincerely hope you’ll be able to recover and I apologize for failing to condense my rambling review.
Marycielo Felton chapter 32 . 9/27
He leido con ayuda del traductor, me he desvelado por no psrar de leer tu intrigante historia, realmente espero que la retomes.
Guest chapter 32 . 9/17
Amazing! I can’t help but admire Hermione! Hope you feel better soon!
amyrlinengineer chapter 32 . 9/6
This story so far is superb. It's the first Tom Hermione pairing I've ever read, and now I'm hungry for more. Thank you so much for sharing this. I wish you well on your health improvement venture.
xxXTomione4EvaXxx chapter 32 . 9/5
Ohhh fuuuuujhhkkkk this is soooo good omgggggg. This had me laughing...snorting... crying...gasping... some of the scenes were so INTENSE and I could just FEEL all of toms and hermiones emotions through your writing. Your characterizations are amazing. I love your Tom and Hermione. You are an amazing writer. And clever too! Uggfffffggg.
Sorcerer's Scone chapter 32 . 8/19
Holy cow! I’m very impressed by this story. I’m usually a Snamione fan, but Tomione is really compelling the way you write it!
TheCat'sLime chapter 14 . 8/16
WaxnWane chapter 1 . 8/15
I had to pull an all-nighter! No regrets; it was flipping fantastic!
carsonbane chapter 32 . 8/15
Hi I just started reading this fic and it is amazing Holy moo cow! Hermione is something else. This is the first fic I have read that has her so dark! And I love it! I really like what you've done with the time travel bit. It's absolutely brilliant. I hope all of Hermione's hard work isn't for nothing though! And can Lestrange please just die?! I know it would muck up all the timelines and stuff but he has to go. He's such a prick! Please take care of yourself my friend! I hope your health turns around!
Guest chapter 13 . 8/8
in chapter 13 it should be for you and me, not for you and i
malfoycollins chapter 31 . 7/31
The irony is not lost on me
malfoycollins chapter 30 . 7/31
You're such a brilliant writer
malfoycollins chapter 30 . 7/31
Nott and Malfoy are always my favourites in fics
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