...That last scene gave me really dirty images...

Happy, I hope you stay innocent.

sweet. the last part seems to be not for happy's eyes. ;p

BOUT TIME
xD Just kidding :3 I understand your pain, I've been having internet problems myself D:
Can't wait for more! :D

Well that was clearly sappy indeed lol. If it was me I would have lose my patience a long time ago and explode the balloons being clumsy and all anyway why did she ask him to hear the will you go out with me word if she's doing it in the end?
Are they doing what I think they're doing at the end coz it felt like they doing it XD. Hahah as expect of Happy he has to barge though I'm surprised Natsu told him not too coz you know usually he is the one to do that. Anyway good chapter, keep up and till the next one. Ja!

It's been a while since you last updated! I hope you are doing okay Miss Chemi!

Awww that last part where he says "my first and last" made my heart go "oof!" like it stopped for a second and then it just jump started, lol :D I like that gray's all cutesy with lucy when they're alone. and that dear lord, he can restrain himself lol :)

cute

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was TOO cute! Gray Lucy Relationship Goals. Sigh. Update soon I'm in love with it. Why must you be such a great writer...I DIDN'T FIND MUCH TO CRITIQUE...NEXT TIME! Love THIS KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII STORY!

(I started this at 3ish in the morning (pst) but then my phone decided to kick me off the internet..)

I am up wayyy too late to be reading this, but as soon as I was about to fall asleep, I got an email saying there was another chapter.. I couldn't resist.

I love Gray.. And I love Gray x Lucy. I think they balance each other out very well.

Hehe, instead of Mario and Luigi, it's ice princess and Luigi.. XD

Since Juvia is staying in prison/therapy for 5 years, will there be a time skip? I wonder how that's going to play out..

This fan fiction is great! It makes me laugh, and since I've been on a fairy tail marathon, I read each character's line in their voices..

I hope to read more in the future! This is the first FT ff I've read and I am not disappointed. :)

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Please update!

KAWAII

you're good at this.
i started reading your story last night and I couldn't stop reading when I woke up this morning but i Had to do some chores. you got my emotions upside down and downside up. at first you got me excited for lucy and gray and natsu and then juvia comes in and ruins everything and then i start getting mad at juvia because she's being a clingy asswipe and then lucy gets bipolar with her feelings because she wants to be a good friend. I love Lucy. knowing lucy enogh from the manga and I anime,i know her personality changes from time to time depending on the situation. i remember during the tournament, lucy feels bad for Flare and Erza mentions that Lucy had a good heart and I was reminded of that when Erza said "she's a good soul". cause in the end, it's not even the fact that Lucy's life was ruined. it's the fact that Lucy still cared about Juvia and believed in her. I mean come on, Juvia cried, wanted to be punished more than the five hyears and theraphy she was given... who wouldn't feel bad for that?

I am not all worried about Juvia's case though. Since I know that Juvia has the torture and Lyon end, I know that her life turns out for the besst and I hope that Lucy and Juvia do get together again in the future along with Gray. That would be a good ending (in my opinion). Thank you for a good read. I loved the ending as well. I can see how Gray slowly builds his feelings towards Lucy and how he's slowly becoming more aware of how much he wants her, not only physically but his emotions otherwise. LUcy being his first and last is just giving me the shivers. rEminds me of my first love but that didn't last long lol. but for Lucy and Gray's first, I know for sure things will work out best.

By the way, I may not know you well enough like your other reviewrs do but you have earned my repect and sincere gratefulness of acknowledgeing you as an author because you seem so passionate wwith your story. Not to mention you made a side chapter for one of your reviewrs, if that's not dedication, then someone tell me what that means because oh boy you are cool and inspiring. I look up to your future chapters. and I will be here to support you. I can't reviewe for each chapter, but I will for definitely sure be there to review and give my full thought on it. Thank you Chemicalria. :D

Lucy is so bipolar. One minute she's hating on Juvia, the next she feels sorry for her. Lucy aside, awwww Gray! I melt.

Ahhhh too cute! Happy and plue finally make an appearance. Anyways, your references to the show were hilarious! I just kind of found the statement after Gray said he wanted to be an ice wizard kind of out of place, it sounded awkward to me.
But besides that, amazing chapter! And I'd like to sincerely thank you, because you do really well with updating. Some stories I really love haven't updated in half a year, and it's just so upsetting. Whenever I get a notification update from you, it makes me really happy because one, your stories are amazing and you have a strong aptitude for writing, and two, I really appreciate the effort authors like you put into writing this. So, thank you so much :)

Woman! Why you no update?! I loooooved this story! You don't get much Graylu ff that's not solely based on lemons, so I'm sooooo glad to have come across yours. I am a Nalu fan myself, but I support other ships too! I am rooting for gray in this one!