WAY TO SAVE LUCY'S DAY GRAY. I was only gone for a week and you updated all the way to chapter 12? Wow! You are awesome! :D I shall make a review for every single one as a token of my appreciation lololol.

I really like how you kept Juvia's obsession with Gray. I'm guessing Juvia will be one of the main antagonists in your story (unless she's the only one then nevermind lol) I feel so bad for Lucy when her skirt rip but it was kind of like one of those ecchi moments in FT where there's that "ah" noise, if you know what I'm talking about XD When Gray put his cardigan over her WOW. Some kind of manga story this is tbh I love it! And Natsu walked out of the line to help Lucy? I WANT A LOVE TRIANGLE DAMMIT

and thw'ats this omg? Now Ur is involved? Goodluck with explaining Lucy to Ur Gray! heh

Of course things will work fine in the end hehe, we wanted our happy ending. Oh Gray cocky much? Lol well I wouldn't refused tutoring session from and with him either hihihi. Whoa . I thought she was dreaming here (more like a nightmare) damn in can't believe this Juvia bitch what she did for a guy that doesn't even give her the time of the day, when Lucy will know about this I doubt sill the courage to forgive (I at least wouldn't) luckily Gray saved her.

I hope Gajell will have this moment in mind just in case we need some proofs. Great chapter like always keep up there's good work, you rocked this 2 chapters and I loved it. Ja!

Dear god what a twisted painful it was. I seriously felt bad for Lucy feelings like this but i I understand Gray being that confused about the unexpected kiss. Ah the reason cliche to get the 2 protagonist closer to each other hehe good one on this.

I seriously hurt when all he had to say was he couldn't have reacted any other way we've what happen but holy ship you totally pull a as kicking twist at the end of it, i seriously didn't see it coming, he might have think oh fuck logic let's go with and BAM kissed her like that right on the spot damnit I squealed so hard at this, now you can say they are even XD.

Excellent job on this one especially the end ;).

And I set fireeee to the raiiin Just kidding XD Anyway, I'm a bit confused. So are Gray and Lucy together now? Or are they like more-than-friends-less-than-lovers? Juvia went overboard there! She always gets in the way! I really love how the story but I'm confused of Gray and Lucy's relationship. :D

I can't believe Juvia! That aside, 2 chapters in a row? You rock!

NO

NO CLIFFIES

WHYYYYYY

Falalalala lala lala tis the season to be sulking... FREAKING CHAPTER IS THIS! GOSH LUCY FINALLY CONFESSED HUHUHU CLIFFHANGER T_T The drama is just... I don't even know how to describe my feelinv right now. Gosh... Gray, I hope you realize your own feelings for Lucy. I'll be so brokenhearted if you turn her dowm /3 Actually I'm brokenhearted now because Lucy looks so... torn between Juvia and Gray huhuhu I would be, too if I were Lucy. But gosh the cliffhanger is killing me! I wanna know what happens next! T_T This story deserves to be rewarded. It's just too good! Huhuhu Update soon and thank you for uploading this! :D

aw nice chappie... more soon.

The CLIFFFFFFFFFHANGERRRRRRRRRRR! UPDATE SOOOOOO VERY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON PLEASE! I absolutely adore this story for its beginning is captivating and the conflict plays with my heart and plus the plot is WAY too cute to handle. I love this and your writing style keeps me in ready for the ride! Just update, ok? Lol pwease I needs it!

OMIGOD OMIGOD OMIGOD I SWEAR IF HE REJECTS HER I WILL STAB HIM RIGHT IN THE YOU-KNOW-WHERE
Just kidding :3
Really excited for the next chapter, so please update soon :D

What will gray do now?

Yes Gray, Lucy likes you and it's rude not to reciprocate. ;)

Haha Natsu is surprisigly more aware and mature than usual than Gray in there I like it. Gahhh I so wanted to scream at Levy to get out of the way and let Gray talk to Lucy damnit! But it's okay Lucy took the lead. O.O What the..? Holy shit w-wwha...gosh are my eyes deceiving me or...? No freaking way!

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *running around hysterically squealing hard* asdfghjisfshuhhkfhzkhfhghoghzfezk damnit this is what you call a stolen kiss and not only one, oh god oh god what a twist, that was definitely bold on Lucy's part but what a better way to make someone understand your feelings (especially in love) than taking action, gahhhhhhhh I can't believe this one. Too stunned to reciprocate poor man and Lu too, haha but I think he got it now though she did great by shocking him to death LOL. Yep my boy she liiiikes you *happy tone voice* and you will too sooner or later ;).

Gosh that was unexpected what a roller coaster of emotions you got me real bad there I love every seconds of it, I can't helped but reading it over and over again I love this part so much. Excellent work girl you rock, keep up. Ja!

Duh lover boy, that's what she just said and did!
Finally someone got the guts AND mind to confess! Now I will really appreciate it if you will do something about that Juvia too Lucy girl. Best of luck!
Will be waiting for the next chappie!

Damn what a twist and drama. So she like him before he become aware that he like her too. Oh gosh I need GraLu moments again, it hurts to read those painful parts. O.O WTF Natsu, LMAO did the guy just flirt or something and kill the mood seconds after, way to go boy lol.
Good chapter even if we had a turn of event but hey the story has to come that way so it will be better later ;). Keep up the good word and update soon (when you can), Ja!