Reviews for Rage
Kali-blue chapter 3 . 1/11/2018
Your Dumbles is pimp or a pimple on the butt of sexist manipulative ahole with a god complex, not a father complex. I like Hestia and Flora in this version. Kali
Saissa chapter 5 . 12/19/2017
Book seven? No no no!

Hermione has been an annoying and arrogant bitch since the day she discovered the houseelves and slavery and invented SPEW! I think that was the 4th book - GOF - which is the exact time this story is set in!
Lamorak Korving chapter 2 . 11/23/2017
Apart from Flora and Hestia Carrow, Tracey Davis and Daphne Greengrass are
my favourite Slytherin students, but I've never trusted Albus Dumbledore.
Tychon chapter 9 . 11/14/2017
A nice, tidy ending. Hearts.
PascalDragon chapter 9 . 11/3/2017
That was a nice story and it was nice to see the Carrow twins and Harry find something in common to bond over despite how bad that shared history was. The happy end - well, for most :P - is definitely appreciated :)
GeorgeTobor chapter 4 . 10/31/2017
No one in the books is with out flaws, but most people don't have quite as many.
IMNSHO Rowling has the most flaws of all, she wrote them after all.
crankypants16 chapter 9 . 10/29/2017
Great story
Right What Is Wrong chapter 5 . 10/26/2017
Hestia and Flora's situation would still be a roulette in the Muggle world. It would be a matter of luck whether they got help or whether their *wonderful* parents fabricated a story about how their girls were unstable, prone to lies for attention, and a dreadful torment to their completely innocent, loving parents. What sorrow, what pity, etc. etc. etc. There's a reason that's the most popular explanation for how the Dursleys never got found out and prosecuted.

Great chapter.
Right What Is Wrong chapter 4 . 10/26/2017
Ahahahaha. Great author's note. :D I see you've read too many Saint Hermione Granger, She From Whom All Light And Goodness Descends, Slayer Of Weasleys, Goddess Of Brilliance, Vanquisher Of OBHWF stories?
Right What Is Wrong chapter 3 . 10/26/2017
Dumbledore's a crazier sociopath this way than if he were pure evil. Jeez, Albus, I thought Ariana was the crazy one. Condemning someone to abuse FOR THEIR OWN GOOD? Not "for the greater good", but on the grounds that dodging frying pans is better than being spoiled? WHAT?

And Harry's a "replacement Ariana", all right. Dumbledore did EVERYTHING he could to make him that way. Perhaps the Horcrux saved Harry's hide - Harry SHOULD have ended up like Ariana, but someone made it to Hogwarts intact. Hmm.

Evil!Dumbledore is canon. The only variance is whether he's out-and-out psychopathic or, as in this fic, so delusional and narcissistic he thinks he's a good and kind person.
I swear half the reason Lockhart keeps being made a pedophile in fics is that an Obliviation-happy sociopath is rather mediocre compared to Mr. "Raised Him As A Pig For The Slaughter", and so authors have to 'power him up' on the evil scale to make him worth noticing...
Right What Is Wrong chapter 1 . 10/26/2017
Great fic. Delayed reading this because I wasn't sure about the Harry/Carrow children pairing, but this is awesome. Reading next chapter.
Gina chapter 9 . 10/22/2017
Thank you so much for the epilogue! Some authors forget to wrap things up and we're left hanging. I've very grateful you finished things for us.

Off to see what else you've written . . .
YeCatsJ chapter 9 . 9/27/2017
Great story
The Woolly Llama chapter 2 . 9/14/2017
It's the room of requirement why do they need to leave?
Trace Reading chapter 9 . 8/30/2017
What a clumsy story this was.

And you left a plot hook hanging when you mentioned Rita Skeeter and didn't even have anything come of it.

Butthead.
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