I miss ravens story...man come back :(

No update in a year and a half. Very sad. Please return to us Raven!

absolutely enjoyable story. so good. i still skip all crow scenes. but everything else. sooo good.

itll be close to 2 years since update, so hoping my lil review brings you back! :D

welp, i knew this chapter was comming but j really hoped it wouldnt.

i dont care about this friend. i want to read about your OC,not another person that came with him.

heres hoping he barely plays a part in your story

Really good story, you sure showed me about suspense just a chapter or two after my last comment, well played. more please.

I think it was a mistake to make this story in the perspective of someone looking back, kinda ruins the suspense since you already know the mc will survive and everything will be fine in the end which just takes away from an otherwise good story.
I would have done this whole part differently, change the info he left behind to not be overly "hey i'm from the past" but still with needed data, make it so that the mc is left with the bomb and is buried in rubble assumed KIA, would make for some great pov reactions to his death and eventual return. that's just me though.

There was some grammar issues in this chapter, remember instead of remind when joker was talking and similar things. in a previous chapter with shepards report it was mention that they had already picked up liara and now that hasn't happened yet. good story though.

We are almost at a full year without an update :(

I love this story so far. Keep up the good work!

Just waiting for the next chapter here. I am really liking your story so far. I love excellently written SI Mass Effect stories, and I consider yours to be one. And you have just started my favorite of the three games, so I really hope you don't drop it now.

You know, rereading I think I caught something in this chapter. It might be accidental, but perchance does the line "We've done the impossible" reference the Firefly line "We've done the impossible and that makes us mighty"?

Nope, most certainly did not lime how this mission played out, and all the forgotten memory stuff is kinda annoying too.

To answer the question asked here, I don't like ravens thoughts or actions here. In my opinion he's overblowing this mission to himself and has serious tipped his hand too much (which has been a huge issue the entire story, along with fucking crow). He shouldn't have tipped off with getting defenses in the mako especially when the Normandy can now just unload them here without suspicion on him. And his big talk about the situation could have instead been "hey let's bring in the 905th and use the Normandy as airsupport" which is completely logical and I'm honestly surprised no one else brought up! A frigate full of marines just chilling playing poker while this shit goes down?

Neat. Hope we get a new chapter soon. Nice work man. Enjoy yourself.

Greet story, I'm all caught up and looking forward to more