Omg, that story was so good, it would be great if you would write it further, I will wait, maybe you are going to continue it, maybe not but thank you anyways, that was a great night reading your story today.

Very super

Amazing!

Ok that was cool, I was worried that Naruto Clone won’t be able to protect them but I’m glad they did, know I just hope he will save their enemies

oh no ive quickly become attached to this naruto,, the writting is just so good! id love to read more of this

Noooo I need more ! Please, I hope you’ll come back to this story one day ! I love a good OP Naruto story mixed with time travel

I have faith that by the time the Chuunin Exam roll around, Sakura will kick ass !

Wow that’s so subtle form Naruto ! Perfect way to make Sasuke progress !

Kakashi acting all cool but I’m sure his mind must be absolutely racing by now !

Yay a first meeting with Team Gai ! Neji’s stick removal will much more painful this time

Nice beginning ! I’m interested !

If you’re thinking of a pseudonym the naruto shadow clone maybe try the name Arashi Kazama (the name that the fandom used to use for naruto’s father)

I'm hoping you'll update this entually

Nice story. Too bad Naru can't advance too fast because of the fox or it would be suspicious, even now Hiruzen has questions. And if Hiruzen has questions it's only logical that certain old war hawk may have some and would like to use his new found rapid advance in skill to his advantages. Can't wait for me to to come.

If this has even half the quality of Second Wind I can only fervently hope that you'll continue this story one day.
Great job! I'm off reading the rest of this story you gifted us so far. :)