Reviews for The Cupboard Series 4: The Fourth School |
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![]() ![]() ![]() See Kathleen, this is how you make the fandom happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absobloominlutely brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait-so they just barged in and started inviting people onto Harrys PRIVATE studying without his permission? They didnt even bloody ask! Theyre so lucky Harrys on board because if he wasnt, hes be bloody pissed that so many people are trying to invade his private studies. I dont like this. I dont like it at all. |
![]() ![]() Loved it.I've sadly found that the fourth book of any series is almost always the last in ranking but was amazing. I just want to say keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Is the answer to Krum's riddle White and Fluer's butter Love the story btw 3 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent response to the name from the goblet! If he loses either way, go and be where you want to! Yes, and again yes! |
![]() ![]() A mongoose is perfect. Usually are impervious to snake venom and can really fuck up a king cobra. Agile and ferocious lol. I like it. |
![]() ![]() I'm still more botheted by head bastard than I am of anything else. Rita isn't a huge problem but I do think she'll meet a grisly end. But head bastard needs to have his head cut off. |
![]() ![]() THANK GOD! I was getting MAD as hell about Harry having to go through this tournament again. Please, please, please brutally KILL the headmaster. |
![]() ![]() I hope dumbodork dies in this story. |
![]() ![]() Just something that I'm really trying to grasp is this: why is a student who has been expelled getting fined for truancy? You...established...in the last installment, through character dialogue, that harry wasn't registered with any school. So how is he being fined for missing a school he's not even enrolled in? Like, I'm sorry but that doesn't make any sense, unless we are truly diverging from the original storyline (I doubt that because of Malfoy setting out for Albania). Oh, well. On with the show. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() So a small correction here - ynys crochenydd is a direct translation of the words potter island in Welsh. I'm assuming the Gaelic thing was a mistake given that this fictious island is off the coast of Wales, and Welsh as a language is rather different from Gaelic (being part of the Brythonic family of Celtic languages - meaning it's closer in relation to Cornish and Breton than it is to Gaelic, Irish, or Manx). |
![]() ![]() god story |
![]() ![]() Great arc and fun idea behind it. I like the little bits that changed and seeing what changes as a result of it slowly unfold. |