Reviews for Unraveled Bandages |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Vengence and Voilance ,Plotting and scheming these are Wounderful you need any Oc's let me now . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Solid chapter, not much criticism to be given. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, fuck. Leave to Aogiri to screw shit up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Oh Jesus...I hope Orange is NOT who I think it is...That would be too painful for Kaneki, adding the fact that his love is joining Aogiri for their safety! I don't even want to think about the betrayal he'll feel from this revelation. He would most likely descend into complete madness. You, my friend, have definitely made a tragedy... ...I'm looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() Oh god if I'm interpreting the meaning behind the name of the chapter right... I hope Yoshimura is ready to be a grandfather and won't kill Kaneki for getting his daughter pregnant. |
![]() ![]() It may have been short, but it was incredibly hot and fluffy! Thanks for the new chapter! |
![]() ![]() I read this chapter in the wrong place and at the wrong time. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was not what I thought was going to happen next but I like it. Anyways update soon and keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Talk about bunny rabbits . |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Did he come inside her? XD Oh boy, may god have mercy on Kaneki's soul if Yoshimura finds out he's gonna be a grand dad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, I followed and favorited it! :) |
![]() ![]() Now this is something... Yamori joining the Anteiku? I don't feel like it fits, you know. The story itself said it's out of character as a joke and I appreciate the humour. The tag could be changed to "OC" since this is a pretty big derail from his character, so as not to create a misunderstanding with the rigorous readers. His explanation could be improved. I honestly just think he's still crazy, and want to cause problems with the cafe. If he's bipolar or has good intentions, I think it should be made more clearly. The story could benefit from less description and more talk, you can leave the imagining to us, it actually improves the story. I know it seems it doesn't and that the more details the better, but it isn't so. |
![]() ![]() Don't worry about the updates, just worry about your personal things and update when it's convenient. I'm sure that most of your readers will happily wait for you to get your personal things in order. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Twice in a row now Touka walked in on them. Anyways good back story it was enjoyable and interesting, even though it isn't Canon which is unfortunate. Besides the point! The point is update soon and keep up the good work. And could you maybe update twice a week? Same length and everything? If you can't then it's okay. |