Hmm, I can't quite tell whether I like this or not.

Eto is beautiful, perfect, because she suffered.
The Pain and Misery reshaped her into something truly special.

She still has a beautiful physical appearance here, but for all intents and purposes, she shouldn't even be able to write the same books since her life should have been completely different due to her actually having a family in this fic.
The Pain shouldn't have been as intense. She can't be the same Eto.

I didn't expected it at all. Big bully Yamori,now serving coffee with a tender smile,seems unerving,eerie
*shudders*. Its ironic how Yamori pushed Kaneki to abyss of insanity,while Kaneki literally beat him to his Sanity.

Damn this story was freaking awesome. I like how did additional tweaks, such as the Jason redemption arc and I'm happy to hear your planning to do more story's involving this au. If I could make suggestion, I would to see your take on TG:Re (which would mostly focus on a more "cold war" theme, with Ken joining the GCG willingly, Rize should have a side revenge storyline involving V and it would be cool if Mudo's did a private investigation on the real identity of her parents killer. Oh and maybe the rise of a new terrorist group, led by the modern heir of Dracula.)

Boo. There is no way I would join a group that tortured my lover no matter what threads. "Or I could send a human with a picture of your top people's facestakes picture with phone*. I mean seriously there has to be a way out of joining.

Fantastic chapter! Eto x Kaneki is the best

This is amazing. My favorite part of this is the connection between Eto and Kaneki. It's just what I want to see from their ship. I love how Eto is around Kaneki, or rather - how Sen is around Kaneki for now. Great stuff!

I really like the way you are handling this fanfic, having certain modifications that I really like and the participation of certain characters. I love Kuzen but his biggest mistake in the manga was abandoning Eto hurt him a lot, reading this is like a "What would have happened if...". And I like how you're handling the relationship between Kaneki and Eto.

Thabk you author for investing your time in making this fic for us. I just wanted to say that I'm proud of you and this fandom...

Oh my god Kaneki what'll you do now, I'm curious af

Things are gonna get freaaaaky now

Damn you're really experienced at writing such scenes, aren't you, author..

Whoa so after Kaneki beat the shxt out of Yamori, he turned into a good guy lol

Wow this was intense... and detailed... good job author, I really mean it.

So Kaneki believes that their leader is the One Eyed Owl, interesting...

I just hope Mr. Yoshimura doesn't find out what Kaneki and Eto do at her home XD jk