"WOW! I'm surprised I even remembered a Jutsu with a sequence of five hand seals. Must be because of my INT stat."
Why the heck would he be surprised that he could remember that? It is the kind of thing he should have practised every day, making the jutsu ingrained.
Not something he should have to think about.

Second POV repeated too much, like she had read his mind.

Nah. I knew these save files would be a pain, but seriously? The last 5 chapters are scrapped, just like that?

why does he not just get a whole bunch of ryo for jutsu I mean if bro just killed 280 zombies in one hour then goes 280 in the next surely by doing that he could have gotten multi shadow clone jutsu by now right?

thats one way to get the word count up...

tf u mean its 30$ for 5 kunai that isn't expensive lol

I'm confused by his leveling criteria tho, like he gained 75k exp and 1 level but then 10k exp and 1 level...shouldn't he be at a higher level by now?

The things we do for growth hahaha re-live 3 years of one's life :D

I love this story

realmente deberías continuar con este fanfic, es uno de los mejores que eh leído

Despite MC being rather selfish this was the best Naruto Gamer fic I've read to date, it's such a pity it's been dropped here.

ok, so this is clearly abandoned, but several things.

this was written well. I think the author would have benefited a whole lot from a clearer outline beforehand, and putting more effort into learning pacing, but overall it's a good start.

there where several points that baffled me, because they were the kind of scenes that were completely pointless, or actively detrimental to progressing the story itself.

resetting to birth, only to fast forward in a few paragraphs to where you already were shouldn't have made it past the initial consideration. what's this character gonna do anytime an actually important character dies? go back again and again?

also, you spent a weird amount of time and consideration into odd things. the detailed school staff, and several paragraphs describing suna's tax code are completely unrelated to the plot.

overall, 6 or 7/10, still worth reading, but has some clear areas for improvement

it's a bit of an odd decision to bring the mom back after the childhood is basically over. you probably have a reason for it, but it does seem odd. most of the naruto character arcs very much lean away from parental supervision the further into the show it gets

I'm sorry, WHAT
excuse me
narratively, that pisses me off. holy shit. wtf. I'm gonna keep reading, but I CANNOT believe you did that.

I'm gonna ignore it after this for the rule of cool, but the "automatic iron sand defense" isn't something that should be possible. the iron sand of the second? kazakage and the gold sand of the third aren't automatic, they're a bloodline style of jutsu.

garaa's automatic sand defence is because of the Ichibi inside him. I dont remember if he still has it after the tanooki gets ripped out, but if it is then its probably skill based at that point.

the MC isn't a jinjuriki, and his automatic defense will raise some serious questions the second people see it, let alone realize it's happening without the MC's knowledge. ok, rant done.