first impressions from chapter 1, I'm concerned. it's well written, but has a full stat sheet (a famous word count bloater) and the main character is aware of the gamer and other gamer fics going in.

as far as pacing goes, the whole first chapter is dedicated to introducing the premise and nothing else. Not bad in general, but with only 13 chapters total I'm worried there's not enough here to sink your teeth into

idk we'll see how it goes

This was really fun. It'd be so nice if the author can continue this, but that's probably a vain dream.

Trash tear ,wouldn't recommend

Writer is skilled at writing and properly articulating scenes and situations far better than 95% of fanfic writers but is wholly lacking in plot progression and pacing , reading up to chapter 7 was a chore and a waste of time , you could skip the whole first 7 chapter and not lose anything , I'm not here for slice of life I'm here for ninjas fighting and killing not what the Mc does for the 7 days of the week , author is better than 90% of fanfic writer but is completely incapable of writing an entertaining story

Can't recommended.

As a series it's like drinking 9 cups of room temperature water and 1 cup of soda. I say it kept skirting the line between bad and kind of bland. And in the end while I wouldn't say it was bad, I also can't say it was good enough to recommend. It's a shame cause there's some good ideas in the but none of it gets fully realized.

Are you alive

so sad this has not been updated in 1 year its so good

My boy! So glad to see someone reference Fantasy Life. The story is pretty fun to read so far.

Love the store you really have to update it

To any potential readers, just don’t read this story. It’s horribly paced. I skip entire chapters and I’m not lost whatsoever. It’s extremely slowly paced. The writer is literally fully describing day-by-day events, like they’re literally writing about every single day Genji spends in the academy. April 10, 11, 12… and so on and so forth. We don’t need to know what happens everyday, time skips would be much appreciated.

To any potential readers, the MC is a disappointment. The MC kept playing himself up and arrogantly kept saying he’d be an S-ranked shinobi…only to train very rarely. He is nowhere near Itachi and Kakashi’s level when they were his age. He is arrogant and doesn’t put in the work required to achieve his goals.

so you wasted all that time only to restart the story?

Genji has gained the title [Orphan Obliterator] due to murderizing the required about of children

No... dying because you didnt properly chew your steak is by far the most stupid and embarrassing death reason i have seen so far.

I know that my review doesn't have much weight and the story has already progressed too far ahead, but here goes...even if the village is in dire straits, the kage won't care what kindergarten aged children are doing in class, he has designated people for that, and they will report to him directly or in some meeting if there is someone noteworthy (and looks don't count). There is no need for him to evaluate them further himself, he has shitload of other things to do.

So far Genji didn't do anything notable to garner attention and that he looks a bit like third kazekage shouldn't mean anything in grand scheme of things...

He should just focus on his Bloodlines, it won't do to split his attention when they are already going to take a lot out of him. Also ngl fighting with massive fans is so lame...