Reviews for Naruto Demon Son of Aphrodite |
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![]() ![]() continue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() …And that is just naruto showing off. He can just kill those hellhounds with his bare hands. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah…grammar mistakes? Pretty sure you don't use "would" here. |
![]() ![]() Ok what the FUCC This just got extremely boring. I'm out. |
![]() ![]() Update? |
![]() ![]() Continue? |
![]() ![]() Ok so I know you will probably never see this since you stopped posting years ago, but this story is just so much wish fulfillment. You made Naruto this unstoppable badass Gary Stu who can beat literally everyone without trying, and gave him a harem! Didn't you say he was twelve years old, but somehow literally every girl he meets who isn't his mother wants to have his kids and jump his bones. Even the goddesses who have swore to never marry or have sex. This isn't Naruto there isn't a single trait of Naruto in them besides having Kurama. This is just some guy who has Dante's personality, and not the good Dante the bad one from the reboot. I genuinely do hope that as a writer you have improved from this, and I wish you a pleasant day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I legit need more of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No one uses an mp3 anymore l |
![]() ![]() ![]() are retired? |
![]() ![]() ![]() sigue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought there would only be three women in the harem? |
![]() ![]() super |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really can't wait for the next chapter and hope you are still writing for all you fan fics and upload more chapters as soon as you can. I have become a fan of your fan fics and really want more of you naruto cross overs like your fear the darkness fan fiction and your 10 tailed jackel of doom fan fiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muy buena |