I absolutely love the way you write Bret and Bart. I love the way you've written them as something more than gamblers, give them depth. I love their actions, feelings etc. The two of them come alive to me while I read your stories.

WONDERFUL STORY. COULDN'T WAIT TO READ IT ALL.

Poor Bart! Cool, a riverboat! I can't wait for more stories!

I'm sure it will be an interesting trip on the Mississippi Bayou Belle. Samantha and her book of Hoyle. Love that thought. Glad Bart and Bret are doing better for now. ;)

Beaten and battered Bart still has a since of humor. Bret has his hands full looking after his younger brother. ;). Poor Bart maybe someday Lady Luck will be nice to him.

Poor Bart! I love their conversation at the end!

Way to go Bret. Donnie got what he needed. And that... "Well, it's all over.". Doctor about gave them heart attack with that line. ;) I do think Brets right with the Mavericks trouble could always be worse.

Omg poor Bart! Ow!

Poor boy :( I don't see Bret being very happy when he finds Bart again.

Hurry Bret. Donnie needs a good thumping! Hope Bart's head holds together. ;).

Omg Bart!

Bart's a knot head for letting his guard down. ;) Hurry Bret. I don't trust Donnie. :(

Oh no, poor Bart! OW!

Bart! Where has Lady Luck abandoned you now?

Oh no! Where's Bart!