Reviews for To Change the Past, To Save the Future
A-Lin chapter 25 . 10/20
As for your future, challenge your fate! You’re ultimate destiny awaits you! And I’m not sure if you still hang around to read these reviews...but I hope you do.
A-Lin chapter 25 . 10/20
O_O that’s awesome! So, five years per fanfic? That’s a lot of effort. Though I don’t have FEA, well mainly because I don’t have a 3DS, I know the game in general. Your fanfic was one of the best I’ve ever read, and you really should keep going, don’t look back. This is already 2020, but you’re still getting loads of viewers and fans. The song Lost In Thoughts All Alone really does suit all of this, doesn’t it? And also kinda Lifelight and maybe The Ballad Of The Wind Fish. Look for amazing Theme songs for fanfics. Btw (we’re getting a bit off topic aren’t we sorry my bad) just saying RobinXLucina is the best ship ever. Thank you so much for the entertaining read, and I hope you can keep going and never give up. Until next time, then!
Hiro chapter 5 . 3/10
English is not my native lenguage, so i'm not very good in grammar, but i can tell you that, when writing a fast pacing action scene you don't need to be very detailed.

Ex.
Just when he was about to strike him, chrom made a swift sidestep to the left, just barely nicking his side.
Just when he was about to strike him, chrom made a swift sidestep, barely nicking his side.

The action is still the same, he evade the strike, but it does not distract you from the main point that they are fighting, leave the gaps in an action scene be filled by your readers imagination.
Raj8 chapter 25 . 3/10
A shame to see that this story is cancelled but I can understand what you mean when you say that you want to create a more original story in the future.

I wish you the best of luck and I'll make sure to check out any other Fire Emblem Awakening stories you create in the future if you choose to stay in the fandom.
Guest chapter 25 . 2/25
It's been a wild ride
Ombraura chapter 25 . 1/4
Well at least the moment we were all waiting for has finally happened o ! Honestly it had me worried for a minute when Grima (I suppose it's him talking in Robin's mind) supposedly managed to stop Robin from confessing and I guess it added a little something to the original confession :) !

That said yeah I could feel that this chapter was probably going to be the last one. Maybe it was the lenght or the way it felt rushed. Well it wasn't that rushed actually (25 chapters is a lot after all) but I honestly believed that even though they would admit they loved each other they would confess after the end of Walhart or sth ".

Anyway it was still good and I understand that you wanted to leave this fanfic on a good note :) ! I think I kinda understand the way you feel. Personnaly when it comes to my Pokemon fanfic, even though I don't want to copy others' work (well aside from Satoshi Taijiri, Gamefreak etc... it's a fanfic after all) I still feel like it's difficult to have my own identity :x.
It's not like I was taking ideas from other fanfic writers (I hope at least). On the contrary I actually grew tired of a certain trend focused on the character of Ash and thus I wanted to make a fanfic which would change a bit from the usual "Better" Ash "genre" (I don't know how making a Gary Stu out of Ash and making him ultra OOC is making him better... And people do mostly that kind of annoying fanfic).
Anyway back to the subject I don't think I got my ideas thanks to other fanfic writers... Once again I hope not. However it's actually hard not to at least take a lot of inspiration not from other stories (films, mangas etc..)... Since, I don't have a lot of time to write anyway it's not too much of a problem but still it's kinda annoying to constantly be careful not to "copy" too much ".

In any case I really enjoyed reading your fanfics and whether you'll come back or not I thank you for your efforts and I really hope you'll be fine whatever you do in your life :D ! Bye bye and keep being cool w !
Shinnypichu88 chapter 25 . 12/31/2019
You could just post what you had planned and tie loose ends that way lol
leawright chapter 25 . 12/31/2019
I got the feeling something was off when i saw the amount of words, but i ll get to that later

I loved both Sumia and Virion insight, telling them about ther respective experiences

As for the confession, it was a nice touch adding thw voice and seeing it defeated made me laugh, as for our lovebirds; after all the waiting, and it was worth it

On to a more serious note, regarding you cancelling this story; I would say that you are being too hard on yourself, except that i know exactly how you feel, and i totally understand wanting to gwt more time to figure out your life

I am sad that the fic ends here, but i will alwaya cherish the memories, who knows ? I might try to continue it, with your permission

And dont just dissapear, let's talk to each other whenever you want, and if you do make another accoubt, i hope you let me know

I am really happy that i met you and that we are friends

Happy 2020
romeoraiden chapter 25 . 12/31/2019
Christ, it's been over a year since we last heard of you, a lot's happened. Three Houses finally came out and it's beautiful, I finally wrote my own Fanfict about Fates with Robin in it. It's nice to hear from you but so sad that you're done but that's alright. Life comes first even it bites at you at times. Good luck.
Xillax chapter 25 . 12/30/2019
It is a shame that you won't be finishing this but you do you. Writing is hard and if you are not pleased about your work you shouldn't force it just to please internet randoms. I think a little explanation like this one is the way to go.

Take your time to think about what you wanna do in your future and I wish you the best.

PS: The Ylissean and the Plegian was hella fun :D
Darksider43 chapter 24 . 11/27/2019
Bubby you better continue this or I'm going to have a heart attack I don't want this to die like a game that had bad reviews I want it to be the attaintion of the year is all most 2020 and you haven't continue it so plz continue this I would like to see them get together plz.
Kahisake-DaLegendNub chapter 16 . 5/18/2019
Aw come on, buddy. You can't just leave that story unsettled. We still need you to finish it up, and everyone's still cheering you up. And about chapter 25, we just wanted to look at it as soon as possible.. Cmon, buddy, don't let this incredible fanfiction die.
DezLovecraft chapter 24 . 4/8/2019
For the gods, really liked, this is just, I'm excited to see how this continues, Well done! and sure take your time, this is a hard job and you need to invest a lot of time in writing, rewriting, thinking in the story, I wish you all people who create such wonderful stories could get more of what you get, anyway very well written, see ya!
Masquer Q chapter 24 . 1/30/2019
So, did the future Grima absorb priests to heal Robin? That's what I got from the story...
romeoraiden chapter 24 . 1/15/2019
That suicide was rather vile, hardcore and an interesting take on Chon'sin due to it's Chinese inspiration and the common issue regarding how serious they are when it comes to honor and violent reactions to any form of dishonor but also the beauty of how they take their traditions to heart regardless of what outsiders may think. Overall, another fantastic chapter.

My only complaints is the absence of Tiki as she hasn't been around for three chapters now. I really feel like she should've been involved in the fight between Robin and Chrom and she'd be the most adamant on figuring out how is that Robin survived. Also the fact that you haven't written about everyone's reaction to Robin's possible demise or the fact that he's alright is rather disappointing.
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