oh fuck.

Well shit. That was a way to end the chapter and another cliffhanger. And now I guess they really are going to know what it's like to face Reapers seeing as Hojo now created Husk and caused the Shinra to no doubt cause another war.

No doubt once Gen sees it he's going to realize that what he wanted was what he didn't want.

Update soon!

Jesus Christ that ending was terrifying! I'm really excited to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!

That... is one of the worst bad ends that could happen... good job breaking it, villain! Or, Hojo screwed again.

I guess its alternative crisis to Sephiroth going nuts...

...no...
things on the Planet just got even worse!

Love it & OHHHHH FUUUCCCKKKK

Fantastic chapter, shephard and sephirotj still have a chance i can feel it! I just want them to kiiisssss aaahhhh but anyway the death of scout is absolutely, completely, mind-bogglingly sad. Sad is not good enough. Tragic is the word. I’m so upset that you murdered scout. The swiftness that the reaper tech took control in is perfect and I loved it but hated it cos boooo reapers. The planet seems obnoxious. Not a fan of the planet. The planet can go home. If no one comes to help, if I don’t get to read Garrus in the last chapter I will riot. Don’t make me riot. Don’t do it.

Amazing buildup of tension and every detail coming together to paint a grim picture for the future of Midget.

Wonder who or what will respond to Scout's distress call.

Sephiroth grows so much in this chapter. It's nice to see the lightbulb finally come on for him and allow him to accept himself (and appreciate Shepard even more).

Well done, as always.

VENDETTA

Well, saw that coming. Hojo is a far less ethical version of a Cerberus scientist, and he doesn't have the Illusive Man riding herd on him. President Shinra doesn't compare.

At least the former had a vision and honestly believed that what he was doing was for humanity's good.

The chapter was worth the wait! I'm looking forward to the next one.

holy fuck...i have no other words then that. Man this just got crazy!

Wow, good shit! This story...I wish there were 1000 more of you writing stories, I swear. Every category needs a writer like you. Gatekeeper scratches my ME/Halo fix and you scratch a fix I never knew I needed till I clicked on this story. Keep fighting the good fight, we appreciate it!

so reinforcment inboud ?

Oh... shit...

My god, the tension. You worked it up so perfectly, I am feeling jumpy and ready to punch someone, honestly. Everything is just working together beautifully (in a horrible and bad way). Thank you for putting all this effort into this story! Chapters like this one just show how effective your writing style is, I am in love. Thank you so much for all your time and effort!