So brain dead. I know you abandoned this like the brain dead dumpster fire you are, but not being able to raise his own son? You're just adding artificial drama where none is needed.

We all know you're a liar and that, unlike what your profile says, you have abandoned all your stories. Hope it stays that way, you brain dead monkey.

This was an outstanding story, and I truly hope you return to finish it one day as it is entirely too good to be abandoned.

I find myself enjoying the way you're changing Sakura from the squealing fan girl of the anime to a girl with a brain in this story. Well done.

I must say, your original game 'Table War' sounds really interesting. I might have to try it myself one day.

This is so wonderful, and I seriously hope that you add more to this story as it just so attention grabbing and an utterly amazing read one that I would love to see just what you're going to have happen next.

I mean no. It's not really bashing at all. Basically. This is what the outcome would be without all the character development that Sasuke went through in the cannon.

Sasuke was was always screwed up. And Naruto was his closest friend and rival. A thing that can't happen now because of the added character, and early training.

In the cannon Sasuke actually was better than Naruto. Because there wasn't anyone to fix the damage done to Naruto's skills by the teachers.

And Naruto doesn't need to seek Sasuke's friendship now because of Haruo.

So there is just no driving force for Sasuke to become a better person.

All the original character development doesn't exist in this AU.

So no. You're not bashing him. This is literally what would have happened to Sasuke without Naruto's friendship. Naruto has the ability to make people better. Even if they're giant 20 story tall chakra monsters.

This is Sasuke without Naruto.

I mean. No I liked it. At the very least haruo would have been completely exhausted. So I didn't expect him to do much actually.

The bigger surprise was Naruto. It's a good surprise though. But. I was expecting him to immediately go kyuby and eviscerate mizuki as soon as haruo got hit.

I mean. He went ballistic from iruka getting hurt, much less someone he literally sees as his younger brother.

I love fics where Naruto unlocks the chains. And it is acceptable reasoning as to why he didn't immediately horrifically murder mizuki in the most gruesome way he possibly can.

This is a good story.

FALLING LEAVES OF EVERGREEN TREES
ICHIGO IS KAKASHI

Please update please please update

Damn it Sirius black! You are awful person.

Sirius is bad influence on Haru/Harry

I love this story and hope you update it

You know, the part about other heirs being sabotaged alonside Shikamaru brought my attention to a very sad thought that I had before: the other Uchiha kids around Sasuke's age. Because Itachi was forced to kill every Uchiha save his brother, which included those of Sasuke's age and younger (there had to have been, the Kyuubi attack would have prompted a baby boom, not to mention the war that ended a little before the attack) I wonder what it was the Academy kids thought when their Uchiha friend disappeared one day and never returned. Or the teachers who outlived their students. Not to mention, how much more guilt weighed Itachi down now that we realize the full extent of what he'd had to do? Just a sad thought... I wonder if someome wrote a story.

hello hey i just check in Wikipedia en it said that Sirius middle name is Orión en his b-day is 3 of noviembre 1959 sooooo be happy. by the way i like the story so far 0.0

November 3, 1959.