Reviews for Twice Blessed Shinobi |
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![]() ![]() ![]() and kasai was like dang u shikaku and ur naraness XD then like dang me for getting drawn into shikaku's naraness then begrudging ok maybe his naraness has its uses |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol and the hokage is guuna curse that deer for motivating shikaku XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() ive seen alot of middle names in hp fanfic seem to follow the naming scheme used in harry's canon name ie using the father or mother's given name as their child's middle name |
![]() ![]() ![]() the civi council and the old fogies are so screwed cuz the manage to motivate a nara XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() well the cat's out of the bag now |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol i wonder if naruto is be given a 'mission' to be haruo's bodyguard or something when harry's hogwarts letter arrives assuming the owl can even deliver the letter since naruto doesnt have magic and even learning senjutsu like in canon isnt gunna change that. yay i was right and i fig'd it would be either naruto or sasuke that would be his friend based on my canon knowledge and the hints dropped |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update. I really enjoy this story. I can’t wait to see Haruo meet Gaara. I feel like Gaara will become attached and will end up staying in the leaf because of how stable he will become. |
![]() ![]() ![]() But wasn’t Tenzo an orphan as well? And will Haruo ever get a last name? I mean potter is technically a clan name on the outside. He could also go by black since he has that headship as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would have like this more if you didn't inculde so much Japanese. I don't understand Japanese so it makes it frustrating to read your story. |
![]() ![]() Hmm don't now but I think the story is dead but I still give a rev of what I thought. The story is well written and has a pacing that makes sense, kinda. The characters are also good for what they are, but neither Naruto or Harry had me really hocked. This rendition of Harry Potter is emotionaly even weaker than the original, with a clingy obsession to Naruto that is plainly unhealthy. Also even if the Autor tryed to make it seem like Harry isn't the only one unstable it doesn't make it better to just throw in other people that are also unbalanced. All in all it's an ok Story but I believe the tags for the story are wrong. Because it goes more in the lines of Drama/ Angst than Comedy and Humor |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh sasuke again |
![]() ![]() ![]() i swear sasuke make me sick, just jump to the point he get killed, ran away to became missing nin or changed please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg Remus breaking Sirius out of prison! I like how he orchestrated that whole thing |
![]() ![]() Please Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue |