|Reviews for A Not So Perfect World|
| miarath chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Cute, it really does run in circles (live), doesn't it?
Like this one very much.
So, the hunter is now the protector?
| Indygodusk chapter 7 . 5/7/2006
I really adore the way you portray JMP's relationship. I've spent the last week reading everything you've written here and at Missing Pieces. I came back to reread this one, and realized I hadn't reviewed. I love the absolute trust they have in each other. I also like it when you pit MP vs Jarod's family/mom. I like it when she understands him best, or brings out a facet that he's been hiding from them. I like her sassyness and his cockiness and their mutual vulnerability. I can't wait to read any new stories you put out. Thank you.
| kokuhaku chapter 7 . 5/5/2006
Excellent story that stays true to the characters and how life can sometimes end up. Thank you so much for sharing!
| HuntingPeace chapter 7 . 1/30/2006
Very very good. I love that you had Miss Parker rescue Jarod. You really brought out alot of aspects to their relationship in this story. I love it!
| BallsBreaker chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
But think of something: we only knew of 2 men Miss Parker was involved with: Jarod and Thomas. Both were long term, committed relationships. Though she was not physical with Jarod, they were in love and friends and for a long time.
Having one night stands and casual affairs therefore is not Parker's way and she wouldn't do that.
| Mari Skyrin-Sarker chapter 7 . 12/1/2005
| Momo20 chapter 7 . 10/20/2005
| Rouge Agent chapter 7 . 6/27/2005
This was an amazing story and I loved. I just discovered you website and cannot wait to go threw it. Amazing work keep these stories coming.
| bloodymary2 chapter 7 . 1/30/2005
Sorry I didn't review each chapter but I read it through... I loved the way you handeled the reunion of Jarod with his family. After all, they are strangers. They don't know the things Jarod has been through, they don't know the man he is now. It has to start slow.
Also loved the description of the watchdogs and the epilog. Life has been hard, but there was a light at the end of the tunnel after all.
This is not your only story I read and liked.
KEEP EP THE GOOD WORK!
WRITING FEEDS THE SOUL AS MUCH AS READING SOOTHES IT!
| Angela chapter 7 . 4/17/2004
another fantastic story, I can't wait to read another one.
| Phenyx chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
testing the new email addy...
| gemini006007 chapter 7 . 4/15/2003
Great ending. That was a real funny ending with the SpongedBob Song. Hope to read more of your work real soon.
| Nancy chapter 7 . 3/4/2003
I absolutely loved this story - in fact, I find all of your works very satisfying. How do you do that - think up an incredibly beautiful story line and then develop it so wonderfully? We are jealous of your talent - but we are VERY GLAD that you write and are willing to share your hard work with us. I wasn't sure that MP and Margaret would be able to come to terms with each other. Margaret very wisely allowed Jarod to have his freedom with MP. When you love something, you set it free - and it will return. That is exactly what happened here. Jarod, MP, and all are very happy. Jarod's uniquenss and love had been allowed to develop - and EVERYONE was blessed because of it. Glad that MP and Jarod are also blessed in this story with three children. Thanks for such an appealing and generous story. We readers are very fortunate that yourself and other gifted writers share your fan fiction with us. Thanks!
| OriginalProxy chapter 7 . 2/26/2003
I've probably reviewed this story before. This is definitly not the first time I've read it, and it won't be the last. I'm in love with this tale. Seriously. I want to print out a copy and keep it in my messenger bag with my copy of Pride And Prejudice and a lable saying "Read For Catharsis".
You are brilliant.
| Soma chapter 7 . 2/25/2003
I fully enjoyed your story. You tied it all up wonderfully. Please write more soon. I'd very much like to read your work again soon.