Reviews for The Muddy Princess
Honoria Granger chapter 2 . 3/31/2015
Usually I hate Hermione the Secret Pureblood stories with a hot, hot hate. This one, not so. You bring your usual flair and finesse to this one. Love it! Love how Hermione just totally smacks down Draco. And Blaise too, to a lesser extent. This is just terrific.
what.if.indeed chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
Great start to another intriguing fanfic! I think it's your writing that can turn a tired, cliched trope and turn it into a readable and engaging story. Well done! On a side note, I wish my procrastination looked more like yours, at least then I'd have something to show for it!
bright places chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
This. Was. Hiilarious.
I absolutely LOVE Blaise's jokes and charms and well, everything about that encounter. I agree with Hermione, he may be frivolous but you still can't help but like him. :)
LOL leaving Theo with Teddy. XD
:) amazing chapter.
Jessicada chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Really liking this story so far. Can't wait to see where it goes.
MoonShadow396 chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Aww, I just kind of want to give Theo a hug.
mshccs chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Hahaha... It's aleays Quidditch... Boys! :P
Mrs. Rast chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
As much as I love Green Girl, I adore this new story! I had 4 planning periods today and was able to reread the chapters thus far. :)
slytherin-demigod-of-221B chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Love it! Love how Theo is acting with the Weasley's and everything! Can't wait for more keep writing!
EisForElephant chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
im loving it ah ah ah ah ah (imagine mcdonalds theme tune) im lovin it! its really good im torn between which fic i like best green girl of this one:D update soon!
xodreamerskyes chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Everything you write is golden! Cant wait to read more!
ShiroKuro OokamiRyu chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Hmmm so if Ginny goes with Blaise then who ends up with Harry? As I expected though, Hermione adored our perverted Blaise, women, girls, men, usually do
Jasmine Venn chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
This chapter melted my heart! Everything in it was just so sweet, it really put a smile on my face.
faithlace chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
This is great! I Love Theo! He is so sweet and like Hermione said a little bit like a lost puppy. Also Blaise is very funny, eagerly looking forward to more of this.
Hug-The-Antihero chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
This was a nice chapter, it was fun seeing Theo get dragged into a family dinner, and kind of heart breaking at how much he seems to need/enjoy it. You do do a good job of writing Slytherins as though they're poor lost little puppies who just need some love.

I'm glad you've chosen to write this version of Molly as a nice one, although I can see her character flaws and appreciate why you expose them in LotL, it's nice to see you bring out her maternal side, and you do a good job of it.

It's also nice watching Hermione and Blaise get to know each other, and learn to get along whilst being unapologetically themselves. I know everyone writes Blaise as a good natured womaniser, but there's just something irresistible about it. It's one of those occasions where the lines between canon and head canon get blurred.
TheFantabulousPotterHead chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Haha I'm really happy about the quick updates. I like Blaise's personality, kind of hoping Ginny ends up with him? Maybe? No? Anyway I liked Ron being general Ron and storming outside to prove the "foul"
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