|Reviews for Empathy|
| cara9001 chapter 6 . 10/25/2013
| Gaaras-Gothic-Ninja-Sappy-Sue chapter 13 . 6/8/2013
Uhm, okay. Here it goes.
You don't know me, and I don't know you, but this is probably the thirtieth time I've read this story, and every time, every chapter, every interaction with the two main characters — the only characters at all, really — blow me away. And I just want to say, that this is one of if not my absolute favorite story, not just on this site; it's one of the best things I've ever read Ever.
Again, you don't know me, and I don't know you. But this story when I first read it a long time ago, changed the way I wrote for the better (I hope) and maybe, if you ever see this review, you'll wonder why or how. But it's probably better not to think about things like that.
So anyway. Thanks for writing thinls. I really love it. And forget those reviews who don't really appreciate your experimenting in this piece, because Me and a lot of other people really admire your work.
| RebornPhoenix05 chapter 3 . 3/10/2012
One chapter is an intire sentence... Think about that.
| Delmasca chapter 5 . 9/30/2010
A rare pairing indeed. One I immediately thought of with the newest seasons of Dragon Ball Kai coming out on blu ray. (which is brilliant when watched in Japanese.) However, I'm finding myself unable to appreciate the creativity of your approach in style each chapter to the point where I can't decide whether you were simply eight years younger and not as good of a writer, or if the purpose was to try different styles over effectively story telling. If your writing in Attraction and your newest piece is a full bodied glorious breath of fresh air, than these chapters are likened to someone with emphysema who is about to die of lung cancer and can't quite remember what normal breathing felt like. While your writing is, as always, painfully beautiful and full, I feel like the styles of each chapter tore at the purpose of writing fiction, which I feel is to tell a good story.
In short, the whole time I've been reading this I thought: You can do better than this.
| Gilded Blue chapter 13 . 7/18/2007
My favorite fic ever quite possibly.
| adrdem chapter 13 . 2/4/2007
Bravo! Love it...
| adrdem chapter 9 . 2/3/2007
OMGawsh! that was the sexiest chapter yet!
Man... The turn of events are well portrayed and unexpected plot points...
| adrdem chapter 5 . 2/2/2007
this ones creatively done... but its in outline form, not note taking
| adrdem chapter 3 . 2/2/2007
it was well written and even though there were different styles used it was still easy to keep on trak with the story...
| Mira-chan2 chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
| Ashton chapter 13 . 2/19/2006
| V-Chan chapter 13 . 11/2/2004
What happen after? How are Goku and Chi-Chi and the others think and how will they react? I just have to know please continue the ?s are killing me!
| PervGirl chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Please continue this story not knowing what happens mnext is killing me . HURRY!
| Imp Gurl chapter 13 . 3/21/2004
AH d00d you finally finished it, yay! Congrats man, this is a good fic. Such a happy ending! *_* *sniffles* I love a good happy ending...
| Prosopopeia chapter 13 . 3/12/2004
Wow, that was utterly lovely. I remember reading this story a good few months ago on P&B Pillow Talk and being completely blown away by the originality and sheer brilliance of it. All the writing styles you have gone into make the story that much more captivating and irresistable to read. It portrays both Vegeta and Gohan in such a differnt manner and I loved it. I'm glad it's over. Now I don't have to check to see if it's been updated! There definitely is a shortage on good Vegeta/Gohan fics, but I'm sure this fic has managed to capture many more fans of the pairing. _ Toodles kaboodles. Hope to see more from you!