But what about Itachi's lung problem?

bored. Seem this whole fanfic is just
waaaa me big sad
Lol. Cringe.

what a stupid writing style i just read the same chapter in 4 different perspectives.

this emotionalism is bordering on OOC and more agonisingly, cringe. You must realise Obito is STILL the man who was the hardened leader of the world's greatest and most insane and intelligent S Rank shinobi, and a man with enough mental toughness to wade through oceans of blood to achieve an obscure goal. Turning him into a crying child is almost offensive. Naruto's talk no jutsu bullsht cant undo ALL That. Go read Windmill. that guy knows the character of Tobi properly.

great, another idiot who never paid attention to canon and thinks amaterasu is accessible to every mangekyo. *rolls eyes*
i love the plot, and your writing is good i hope you don't make any more mistakes tho

He really has one decisions here, go blind and use your eye to kill madara and tobi (forgot it’s name)

I like the idea, but i dont like reading the same chapter twice from two-three different perspectives.
So, i'm done.

Just god damned amazing. Superb fic

One way to described this fic? Beautiful. I loved the way you wrote it and it also feels canon, though some scenes can be disturbing, this story is actually wholesome. The portraying of emotions are not too less or just cringe, it's well written and you can really feel the emotions. This story is not "oh, I came back into the past yay! Time to make things right!". This story tells about a boy learning to love and accept himself while turning to the right road of life.

Anyways, this story is very well written. I learned some new words too. Good job author! (Where is the sequelll...!)

Beautiful and perfect.

I think this is perfect. Beautifully captured ideals and emotions. A sequel would just make the message in your fic…. Diluted? Not as impactful? Etc etc

Thanks for this story! I love the way you write the story, there are up and down time for the story which lure me into it. I also like the way the dialogue went, some was really emotional so good job on you!

Again. Thanks for the story!

I have to thank you for writing this story really good ending

i have nothing but praise for this fic. the way Obito was characterized… beautiful. i’ve never seen someone truly understand him the way you do. this fic is everything i’ve ever wanted and more. thank you thank you thank you!

the fact that English (i assume) isn’t you’re first language and yet your writing is better than 99% of native English speakers… wow. anyways, will never be getting over this fic within the next 10 years thanks for asking.