Reviews for Predator: Island of Cannibals
Citrine Nebulae chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
A solid start! I love the voice you've established for your narrator - I may have missed (his?) name, though. I myself find the perspective of an yautja extraordinarily difficult to write, but you've done it with very good taste. I also find this chapter and the premise of the story impressive, because nature itself as an antagonist is not an easy thing to portray. I can't wait to see what threats our narrator faces as the story continues, and I will be reading on. :)
Yeyinde158 chapter 2 . 4/14/2015
Really good start I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Don’t really get the relation with them seeing the color red and their mucus membranes.
I would not think too hard about that, it is always difficult to understand the biology of the Yautja (Predators) because we think from a human point of view. Maybe for aliens it is different.
But it gives writers the amazing opportunity to be creative with writing so thumps up and keep it up.
jrmf chapter 2 . 4/11/2015
Great chapter. Can't wait to find out who the ooman is. Do they help him out or do they try to hurt his chances at survival. Keep the updates coming!
Clear as Mud chapter 2 . 4/11/2015
Survival stories are the best - I look forward to where you'll go with this!

Also, I understand your confusion regarding their mucus membrane/inner mouth pinkness. I've given up over thinking it, since apparently the creators weren't bothered to… And the vision issue is always up to creative license. I have yet to encounter a story that didn't modify that feature in some way.

Anyway, keep it up! :)
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