Reviews for Predator: Island of Cannibals |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A solid start! I love the voice you've established for your narrator - I may have missed (his?) name, though. I myself find the perspective of an yautja extraordinarily difficult to write, but you've done it with very good taste. I also find this chapter and the premise of the story impressive, because nature itself as an antagonist is not an easy thing to portray. I can't wait to see what threats our narrator faces as the story continues, and I will be reading on. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good start I am looking forward to the next chapter. Don’t really get the relation with them seeing the color red and their mucus membranes. I would not think too hard about that, it is always difficult to understand the biology of the Yautja (Predators) because we think from a human point of view. Maybe for aliens it is different. But it gives writers the amazing opportunity to be creative with writing so thumps up and keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Can't wait to find out who the ooman is. Do they help him out or do they try to hurt his chances at survival. Keep the updates coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Survival stories are the best - I look forward to where you'll go with this! Also, I understand your confusion regarding their mucus membrane/inner mouth pinkness. I've given up over thinking it, since apparently the creators weren't bothered to… And the vision issue is always up to creative license. I have yet to encounter a story that didn't modify that feature in some way. Anyway, keep it up! :) |