Reviews for A Prince in Pain
wandamarie chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
nice job
Mikayla chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
very the father/son time

God bless
Drumboy100 chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
Very sweet, appreciated that the king couldn't proceed with the punishment once Dastan called him papa. Dastan's antics only increase with his age, so he and the king will be back in this position again. If your muse prompts you for chapter 2, the two older brothers' behavior has not been addressed...
MacAttack3355 chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
Cool story! I second the motion that the big brothers need to experience some fatherly wrath of their own. And Sharaman needs to start giving Dastan his baths before all the servants up and quit their jobs.
wandamarie chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
Nice one shot tjhanks
sueturpen chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
Sounds like he has two older brothers' who are brats. Maybe they need to visit their father for some instruction.
ficwriterjet chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
I thought that was very cute.