You are beating a dead horse. Minor changes won't solve the big problems with your story. Why not just move on?

I really like the way you're having Wickham ingratiate himself to Elizabeth. It's very well done and true to character.

Did you really need to do that? Ugh!

Hahahahah! He's gay?! XD

So sad that it should come to this! Ha love your quote and this story.

Absolutely brilliant!

Thank you for the slight changes to extra paragraphs to your story, it just finished it off without making wholesale changes.

thank you for the changes. looking forward to the outtakes!

I loved your story. The characters were just canon enough, and the plot was delightfully twisted about. Thanks for this.

Good, keep it coming. Happy New Year!

Great, keep it coming.

Nice chapter, keep it coming.

:-) By the way, I like how you make every character a person, with their own background, even the minor characters.

"fifteen day of Advent" - "fifteenth day"

Yay! for Jane having surpassed her younger sister Mary's skill at piano playing.
IMO Elizabeth should write down the versions of the fairy tales she tells Georgie - and probably by now in the timeline of this fic, her own children and her three nephews who undoubtedly like the fairy tales as much as Georgie, their mother, does.
If I lived in the early 19th century I would have revelled in being called a bluestocking.
I hope Anne de Bourgh knocked Mr. Collins down a fair few pegs. He needed that.
Yay, huzzah! and any and all other utterances denoting joy at Fitzwilliam having taken Mr. Collins to task for talking out of his overly ample arse about Pemberley.