|Reviews for Reinforced Revelations|
| dragonnargus chapter 18 . 9/12
I... really don't think these necromancy and Astral Plane thing belong in this story. It didn't connect to either Nanoha or original HP as far as I know, and neither was the story about Harry the Necromancer but rather the master of Reinforce, with specialities in runes and enchanting and combat magic. None of that actually translate to proficiency in necromantic arts that seem to just pop up one chapter. Out make the entire section admit these astral walks rather disconnected and uninteresting. Not to mention both runes, enchantments Reinforce, and all the familiars, feel rather ignored right now. What with him going around doing stuff all by himself.
| SpikeThunderstri chapter 23 . 9/1
Well, 'ello there, mate! Now, let's have a chinwag about, shall we? First off, let me tell you, it needs a proper kick in the knickers to make it edgier. How about we toss in a few more rebellious characters like our dear friend Spike Thunderstrike? Give 'em some real punk flair, piercings, leather jackets, and wild hairdos. Next, the plot needs more twists than a London fog, innit? Introduce some unexpected turns, like a plot twist involving a stolen crown jewel, a secret underground punk club, and a punk rock anthem that sets the stage for the final showdown. And don't forget to sprinkle in some Cockney slang to give it that extra bit of authenticity. With these improvements, it will be a proper belter of a story, I tell ya!
| JDS62 chapter 23 . 6/16
I'm not sure if you are still on the site, but I just wanted to let you know that I love your fics and hope to see them continue someday. I just finished another read-through of your Reinforce series and going to read the first fates gamble again soon, once again hoping to read more from you in the future.
| Zyphuris chapter 23 . 4/10
Any chance of this being continued? Awesome fic and I keep coming back hoping for updates.
| havoc764 chapter 1 . 4/5
Hope this gets finished at some point, probably one fo my favorite fanfics.
And one of the better crossovers.
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/17
Rereading all three books I have a theory on what Harry is, it didn’t hit me until I was reading a Genshin Impact fanfiction and I read a few things and made some connections to both that fanfic and the contents of the three “Reinforced” fanfics.
Harry’s a Homunculus, an artificial human. Specifically the Magnum Opus, the Great Work. With his dragon animagus progressing it sounds like Harry is in the Albedo or Ruebedo stage. With Reinforce being merged with him, and the Magnum Opus being depicted as a combination of Male and Female, it also explains why in a later book Lily sees Harry as being female for a brief moment.
Also, I suspect Origin might be from the Fate/Stay Night universe and has connection to the Kaleidoscope. Mainly because I heard the words “bounded field” and looked it up.
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/3/2022
I really hope you update the story eventually it was getting to the best part.
| Jamerz06 chapter 23 . 10/11/2022
Can’t wait to see the next chapter
| Cleston chapter 23 . 10/6/2022
Any chance that you write again?
| Random Reader chapter 23 . 10/5/2022
... Oi Still Alive?
| emmanuelq199 chapter 23 . 8/20/2022
| greatdxd chapter 23 . 5/27/2022
please update Heroes of Spirit or someone send him a private message to see if he is going to continue writing or if he retired it has been almost ten years since his last update.
por favor actualiza Heroes of Spirit o alguien enviale un mensaje privado para ver si va a seguir escribiendo o si se retiro ya a pasado casi dis años desde su ultima actualizacion.
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/24/2022
Oh boy Harry Ritter has a harem! And he does not know it. Or maybe he does and is in denial about the whole thing.
Now can I make a suggestion? Have Harry walk Odin’s path to power and knowledge because there is a similarity between the two.
Harry has a pursuit of forbidden knowledge, Harry Ritter has now traversed the realms of death for more knowledge. Harry Ritter uses Runes and also Necromancy.
Odin the Allfather did that as well in his pursuit of knowledge. Raising the spirit of a Volva(a Norse Seer) to learn about Ragnarok.
Odin gave up one of his eyes to Drink at the Well of Mimir for knowledge and Odin died on the World Tree and rose again as a sacrifice of himself to himself. Odin sacrificed who he was for what he was meant to become in order master the Runes even when he gained so much knowledge before hand such as learning other paths of magic in the form of Seidr which to the old Norse was Feminine Magic and yet he kept seeking for more knowledge and power such as the incident with him gaining The Mead of Poetry.
Harry Ritter has died but risen into something more powerful and he also has distinguished scars and disfigurements.
What I am saying is dig into all of the Old Norse and Old Germanic Mysticism. Now make sure that Harry also learns Germanic Shamanism and other old Norse and Germanic Magic.
Speaking of the Runes, I would love it if Harry did learn more Norse Magic and the other powers. Specifically the ones he gained from studying Gandr, Seidr, and then the abilities Odin gained when he learned The Norse Runes and also gaining the Mead of Poetry.
And also Odin is famous for his many loves and learning feminine magic as well as the Norse. Hint Hint, give him a harem.
Odin is also affiliated with Storms and The Wild Hunt.
If I were you make sure Harry also gains greater power through study of Norse Magic and gains control of the elements of Fire, Wind, Water, Ice, Lightning, and Earth!
Speaking of which I would love it if you go all the way with the Norse inspiration and he gets his Animagus form soon.
Harry in his Dragon form must breath fire, poison, and ice along with being able to fly. In fact lets turn this kid's dragon form into a black scaled, four legged, two winged, fire, poison, and ice breathing version of Smaug the Terrible. Also maybe to tie into the Norse and Germanic symbolism that the Belkan was inspired from Harry has a few more powers such as each of his scales having a Norse Rune on them and other Arcane symbols.
And to top it all off take a look at these two games inspired by Norse Mythology I recommend is the first Valkyrie Profile Game.
Maybe Harry Ritter learns about the full potential of the Runes from meeting one of the legendary Valkyrie’s and the second game I recommend is Odin Sphere Leithrasir. Let Harry learn the mystical skills of the mages from both games and he also makes the Psyphers. The protagonists weapons in Odin Sphere Lethrasir.
| Yog-sothsoth chapter 7 . 5/9/2022
Just read previous chapter to the end. It turned harem. Don't get me wrong I'm really interested in whatever happens next. It was THE Best Nanoha fic of them all, in my opinion, so it's so very painfull, but I'm physically incapable of reading harems. I loathe them. Sorry. I'm not the most emotionaly stable man on Earth right now. Hope you will end it actually, your writing of a very good quality. Goodbye.
| Yog-sothsoth chapter 8 . 5/9/2022
I think i don't like Isis anymore. Hope it'll somehow resolve itself without any romance. Yea, that's just the reason why I don't like human-like familiars