Reviews for What Makes an Enemy
Becky Colon chapter 1 . 5/17
Please update!
anayu123 chapter 7 . 3/7
Yeee
Ania8472 chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
please write more
2lazy2signin chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
It's "You'll steal another" not "Go steal another" btw :)
mems1223 chapter 6 . 8/9/2017
This is super good! Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!
anayu123 chapter 6 . 7/14/2017
Dude I'm so happy you updated! MORRIS HUG YAYYAYAYAY
anayu123 chapter 5 . 4/21/2017
I really enjoy this story! I think first person for Bets or third-person. But if you're going to do another character's POV, I'd reccomend stating whose pov it's in.

Hope you update soon!
maiola chapter 5 . 10/24/2015
Please update, this story is so good.
alan chapter 5 . 8/1/2015
please update soon. this is so great. i love the delancy brothers so much and it so hard to find figs for them.
biankies chapter 5 . 7/25/2015
This is definitely going to be good. I think there are far too few Delancey brother fics out there. Especially ones with them being nice to newsies.
Thanks for sharing!
Enjoy your time zone!
KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING!
HPNewsie chapter 4 . 6/15/2015
I just found this story and I really like it! It's cool to see a little bit more about the Delanceys and I like your OC! I just have a question: who knows that Bets is a girl and who doesn't? Anyway, great story! Keep updating!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/15/2015
I love it please update soon!
ThalicoRules5678 chapter 3 . 4/22/2015
I love this story, please update soon. :)
Muffinsweep11 chapter 3 . 4/14/2015
Wow please update soon! Personally I've always liked the Delanceys and always fancied the whole 'Morris and Oscar is Mike and Ike' idea. Don't see much of those around so I'd really like to see where you go with this!
Newsie Girl chapter 3 . 4/13/2015
Great story, please update soon.
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