Reviews for The Son Of The General
pistonsfan75 chapter 6 . 10/4/2015
Bummer this never got finished! I like it. To bad it's been 11 years.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/14/2013
Are you making another chapter
blauweregens chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Why don't you continue this? It's a really good story.I like how you portray Shang and I'm curious how exactly it'll end with Na is really nice,please don't drop it.
Eline chapter 2 . 5/16/2010
You should really continue 's a great story,I'm curious what will happen when Mulan comes into the picture
LOLa chapter 6 . 3/20/2010
You should continue the story! Good Job
thecoldest raindrops are tears chapter 6 . 10/3/2009
OMG yes i know Mulan belongs with Shang

and I probably am one of the biggest Mulan/Shang lovers,

but I feel so bad Na-Lei! Poor abused girl!

And I must admit, I have a way to get her and Shang from finally sealing the deal!

Her father rapes her and marries her instead! It sounds horrible, but I honestly kept asking myself where Mulan was going to be in the story.

Please update soon!
Ana chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
This is such a GREAT story!
Amber24 chapter 6 . 3/30/2006
damn...you've taken a long time away from this story...i hope soon you will right more cause this is an interesting pov of shang's...
CluelessAngel chapter 6 . 3/25/2005
Hey sounds good! where is Mulan in all of this! lol. sounds good so far. keep up the good work
Mickey Mouse 100 chapter 6 . 2/6/2005
Good update soon!
Canadarulz chapter 5 . 1/14/2005
This story goes at a nice speed. Why did you stop, I like it.
xxxroxyxxx chapter 6 . 12/23/2004
very good. But i so want Mulan and shang to get together!keep writing!
MiniEllie chapter 6 . 9/17/2004
this is brilliant! does na lei come up again at the end when shang falls for mulan? please update soon!
NoMo chapter 6 . 9/4/2004
Please finish!

-NoMo
Black C chapter 6 . 1/17/2004
A very well written chapter, Becky5!
Please ake sure you don't take a very long tie to update the story!
Good luck on your story!
This is BLACK "C" saying, "C" ya later!
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