Reviews for Angels Dancing on Her Eyelids
thecagedsong chapter 3 . 11/13/2016
Your descriptions are wonderful and Sakura's actions right on target. I love the scene where she is speaking to herself, to her guardian angel, and no one else can hear her. I do have one small problem with the chapter.
How could a letter written five years before have predicted when Sakura would decide to get her eyesight back? Or that she would become a guardian angle for Sakura? If anyone thought this was strange, or mystical, I would be okay with it, but it kind of messes with the allusion.
thecagedsong chapter 2 . 11/13/2016
YOu have some descriptions in here that are sight based and control Sakura's reactions (Sakura can't see the doctor's glasses nor can she tell the letter has fancy designs) and it takes you out of the story. It can be fixed by having Tomoyo whisper descriptions, or her feeling the impressions on the envelope.
Undertheskys chapter 15 . 2/14/2016
Story is okay
Undertheskys chapter 4 . 2/14/2016
Oh no
Undertheskys chapter 3 . 2/14/2016
Yaaay she can see again. Now how is she gonna find him?
Engxty Piksy chapter 15 . 8/4/2014
Wow! Such a well thought-out story! Really enjoyed reading it!
StarElsie chapter 15 . 7/19/2014
I was wondering if the elders of Syaoran's clan would accept Sakura
StarElsie chapter 14 . 7/19/2014
Yay! They are finally together. I hope the elders from Syaoran's clan won't be against Syaoran being with Sakura.
StarElsie chapter 13 . 7/19/2014
WAA! Syaoran is gone :(
StarElsie chapter 12 . 7/19/2014
Go and disappear forever Lei
StarElsie chapter 11 . 7/19/2014
StarElsie chapter 10 . 7/19/2014
Go disappear liar Lei
StarElsie chapter 9 . 7/19/2014
Waaa! So sad
StarElsie chapter 8 . 7/19/2014
Ugh! Go and disappear Lei!
StarElsie chapter 7 . 7/19/2014
I hope Lei would disappear
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