Reviews for Better Brother
Glazier Blue chapter 9 . 8/23/2017
Awesome! Just awesome.
No Guns Only Roses chapter 9 . 8/14/2017
I saw a cardinal pass by the car during my travel to Oklahoma, and my own father recently passed away, so maybe he was trying to communicate with me.

This was a touching chapter, good job.
Pheonix09 chapter 9 . 8/12/2017
Hey, how are you? I think the thing about the bird would be perfect to revisit after Splinter was killed, the boys would need it especially Leo being comforted by Raph

That was wonderful, amusing and sweet, I loved it too and nice job but update as soon as you can please
Pheonix09 chapter 8 . 5/28/2017
Hey, long time no speak how are you

That was wonderful and awesome and just what I needed after today, I loved it and excellent job but I can't wait to read the next chapter
No Guns Only Roses chapter 8 . 5/28/2017
I liked how Leo came to Mikey's defense. Raph just can't control his temper, can he?
LilyTheNinjaGirl chapter 7 . 12/31/2015
You've been doing a lot of stuff with Leo, him falling down and getting sick, or having nightmares. Which is awesome, and this is a Leo based story, and he was the one who went through the trama.

I think it would be awesome if you had something happen to Raph. Maybe a nightmare concerning Master Splinter and Shredder when Shredder tossed him down a sewer drain. Or maybe Raph should be secretly hiding an injury after the fight with the Chimera, and he's hiding it so that he can help Leo get stronger, but eventually too much is too much, and he breaks down.

I love this story so far! It's so amazing and you are such a talented writer! I can't wait for more!
leggo lover 99 chapter 7 . 12/19/2015
Aw this story is great. I am loving all the bro fluff and Leo scenes!
Can't wait for more!
leggo lover 99 chapter 4 . 12/19/2015
Raph always ends up being sweet to leo! :) Brotherly love at its best!
leggo lover 99 chapter 3 . 12/19/2015
Good old Leo giving Raph a lecture! Of course he isn't admitting he hates shredhead, Leo's far too zen! ;)
Excellent story!
leggo lover 99 chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
Another aww from me. The start of season 3 are some of my favourite episodes and you have filled in the gaps beautifully!
leggo lover 99 chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Aww this is so adorable! Loving it so far!
midnight wolf chapter 5 . 12/18/2015
good job
Andromakhe chapter 7 . 12/10/2015
I really enjoyed this chapter. The beginning section with everyone saying Leo was a disappointment and bad at his job really felt in-character. I think the scene might have worked even better if you showed Leo gradually doubting himself under the onslaught. You know, like, "Maybe you guys are right. If Sensei thinks I'm weak, it must be true." But the scene was really clear to imagine and the dialog was excellent.

I liked how Raph talked to Leo about Leo's tendency to lecture them coming from a place of concern rather than arrogance and that Raph understands that. The group hug was awesome. I love those. And it was great to see the team being supportive and encouraging, telling Leo they would not think less of him if he sometimes struggled emotionally and needed someone to listen or help him to do things. I know Leo's the type to shut people out when he's upset, and I think he really needed to hear that he's cared about as an individual and that it's not healthy to close himself off for too long.

A great examination of Leo's weaknesses - the concern about what people think and his habit of letting negative emotions crush him. I know he does it because he's both ashamed of perceived weakness and doesn't want to say anything because he thinks people will be disappointed in him, so it was nice to see everyone showing they respect Leo.
Pheonix09 chapter 7 . 12/9/2015
That was another awesome and cute chapter, I loved it and wonderful job but I can't wait to read the next one so please update soon
Natalie Ryan chapter 7 . 12/9/2015
Perfect... So much emotions in it, lovely chapter, and I missed the updates of this story. I laughed and cried and now I can go to sleep with a beautiful story in my mind. Thank you. Have a nice day/night (still not into time zones hehe) :D
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