Reviews for RWBY: Tomorrow and Never Again |
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![]() ![]() I'm hoping Nora breaks Emeralds legs for that to easy comment. With the death cloud around him that's the least that should happen to her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro please update this. This is fic so actually good. It is like I am reading another Final Fantasy story like. Damn bro I am ready to pay you dor this. Please brother make a miracle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miss this. |
![]() ![]() Pls update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man I really hope you continue this. While I still don't understand about the time travel aspect or whether we can call it that in this story, I still considered it very good especially after fall of Beacon. The plot before it was a bit meh but the fight with Adam is crazy good. |
![]() ![]() god how this black dust being introduced is boring ffs, so much shit |
![]() ![]() Pretty obvious, but I take it that you've abandoned this then? A shame, as this fic is honestly really good. |
![]() ![]() Really good and interesting story. Shame it doesn't seem to be active any longer. |
![]() ![]() I’ll be honest, I can’t keep reading this. It’s not all that well written, the author is too timid to make any significant changes from canon, gets characters to act out of character, and the dialogue is a bit cringy. |
![]() ![]() Okay, other than the awkward dialogue, I’d like to point out that Jaune knew Blake was a Faunus. Has since he first bumped into her in this timeline. You also have him acting incredibly ignorant. He doesn’t know basic history when he did go to public school and has attempted almost a full year of Beacon (or he should have a very vague recalling of Beacon’s class material). And you keep changing things like who is at the dock without changing any outcome. Why do that? It defeats the purpose of the change. |
![]() ![]() did you abandon the story? I like this story. |
![]() ![]() are you not going to continue this story or have you abandoned this story? man, I like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... the wedding gonna go to shit, isn't it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! Nice chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How to Woo a Schnee, by Jaune |