Reviews for RWBY: Tomorrow and Never Again
Reviewmonkey4u chapter 15 . 1/4
I'm hoping Nora breaks Emeralds legs for that to easy comment. With the death cloud around him that's the least that should happen to her.
Elvengard chapter 122 . 3/31/2024
Bro please update this. This is fic so actually good. It is like I am reading another Final Fantasy story like. Damn bro I am ready to pay you dor this. Please brother make a miracle.
nashwhitewolf chapter 122 . 3/26/2024
I miss this.
Guest chapter 122 . 2/1/2024
Pls update
addindanishah93 chapter 122 . 1/8/2023
Man I really hope you continue this. While I still don't understand about the time travel aspect or whether we can call it that in this story, I still considered it very good especially after fall of Beacon. The plot before it was a bit meh but the fight with Adam is crazy good.
Guest chapter 15 . 12/23/2022
god how this black dust being introduced is boring ffs, so much shit
Guest chapter 122 . 12/4/2022
Pretty obvious, but I take it that you've abandoned this then? A shame, as this fic is honestly really good.
Guest chapter 122 . 10/27/2022
Really good and interesting story. Shame it doesn't seem to be active any longer.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/20/2022
I’ll be honest, I can’t keep reading this. It’s not all that well written, the author is too timid to make any significant changes from canon, gets characters to act out of character, and the dialogue is a bit cringy.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/20/2022
Okay, other than the awkward dialogue, I’d like to point out that Jaune knew Blake was a Faunus. Has since he first bumped into her in this timeline. You also have him acting incredibly ignorant. He doesn’t know basic history when he did go to public school and has attempted almost a full year of Beacon (or he should have a very vague recalling of Beacon’s class material). And you keep changing things like who is at the dock without changing any outcome. Why do that? It defeats the purpose of the change.
Lio chapter 122 . 9/7/2022
did you abandon the story? I like this story.
Lio chapter 12 . 9/7/2022
are you not going to continue this story or have you abandoned this story? man, I like this story.
smolhauz chapter 55 . 8/11/2022
... the wedding gonna go to shit, isn't it?
fahri.uchiha chapter 10 . 7/1/2022
Haha! Nice chapter!
fahri.uchiha chapter 9 . 7/1/2022
How to Woo a Schnee, by Jaune
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