Reviews for Dragon Ball - Heart of Adventurers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() could his writing be this fire!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope everything's okay I'm looking forward to some updates soon I hope you're safe and well and I hope you're safe and well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since you put mana as official power source for magic. I hope Goku have full mastery of Ki to counter such foe.I don't know but just make him somehow go to planet yadrat and learn something useful there. Also where is Prince of all saiyan btw. Try to spread his royal seed some where lol |
![]() ![]() Since it's childhood friends themed you shouldn't have Bulma date Yamcha. Even in this fic she's still Yamcha's sloppy seconds. lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you update This is also my past time lentioning this but i wholly disagree with the pan character as goku daughter, just makes no sense. Also with your writing i wouldve loved to see gohan grow up in this kind of household and see how he would turn out ngl. And i want to see goten and trunks as brothers doing soem Fun adventure stuff but yeah thats my wishfull thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I'm not gonna engage in character bashing, but- [engages in character bashing anyways]", and an OOC Bulma as a bonus |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterparteverything about saiyan this blood this pride this, but tullece is just doing experimenting and less fighting now snd he is probably losing his saiyan will |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterpart |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterpart |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter Im still wish that gohan was born Like no prob he can have a daughter but taking away gohan n Im only this way cz i wanted to see what u would do with gohan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wouldnt it be funny if tullece died from sickness or summ instead of fighting like he wants |
![]() ![]() ![]() bruhh 100 ki blast 100 bone breaking punhes from goku and guy still Stands One ki blast from dude and goku jumps to protect bulma he badly injured |
![]() ![]() ![]() If could Help you with the story I would but I suffer from mild cases of dyslexia unfortunately |
![]() ![]() ![]() And everything is being set up. I still hope it's revealed Goku and Bulma have another child. Within the 3 years. This time a son. Bulma accepts the flaws of Goku, they known each other forever. And being their husband and wife. They love each other. That's what matters. I hope you have Bulma wanting to see the Androids. But Goku has a protectiveness because he doesn't want to get killed. And more importantly if they have another child. Goku could remark...'now who's being reckless." Makes it funny since Bulma addressing her husband was... Is Krillin still going to have a crush on 18? I hope so. Keep writing. I can't wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A pleasure to come by and see a new chapter dor this amazing story. |