Ok. Ok. For the sake of Obi Wan's character development, I can handle this.
also lol anyone trying to parse Vader's motives and plans, meanwhile Vader is just rolling with it so the Jedi won't have visions about him and the Jedi can't even have visions about him

WHAT?! WHY? NO!
haha, dismemberment funny
BUT NOOO QUI GON

lol poor clones being tossed around between Vader and Yoda

YAY!
I had hoped, but it's nice to see it confirmed

when he says "I am Darth Vader"
WOW
I felt that in my bones
it felt GOOD
I can only imagine how Vader himself must be feeling, seeing as he's an unhinged bloodthirsty drama queen
wow

STARKILLER

Dew it

HE SAID IT! HE SAID THE LINE

I like this take on Vader and Leia.

I really like that last bit with Vader and Shmi.

This is off to a good start. Tho I find shmi coming to terms with anakin traveling back in time happens a bit to quick.

Well, that dragged on.
This story was fantastic up until the birthday party.
Everything after, not so much.
It seemed like you walked the Shyamalan path of throwing in as many lame twists as you could. Along with cliffhangers. Cliffhanger always suck.

Eh, well, thanks for the everything up to Chapter 30. I loved that part.
Keep being awesome.

I wonder how long this filler section will be.

You know what? I will allow the foolishness of Order 66 still coming to pass (despite Vader supposedly stopping it), only because Vader pretty much bitch slapped Maul for touching Ahsoka. That seems more than fair.

Vomit 2: Electric Boogaloo.
And I just put away the brain bleach.