Ah, so this is why Vader did that nonsensical stuff about changing the order. So this is why Anakin talked so weirdly in a way no one ever would when saying "execute order 66". And of course, Anakin's words would work, even when not given as an order, even if filmed from the back 20 meters away. And of course, we're just ignoring the fact that Vader has bugged the Chancellor's ship and could have stopped this.

So the plot could happen.

Serious talk. Don't.

This is so stupid.

First of all, literally lying in your narrative is not "tricking people", nor are people "falling for it". If I write "John killed Margaret.", and then have Margaret be alive, I'm not tricking people. I'm just writing a bad story.

Secondly, there is no rhyme and reason to what people do and your story. Unpredictable is NOT a good thing in your case, because there is no narrative or cause and effect. Your story is not only "unpredictable", it's also nonsensical. Why do things happen? Why do people do what they do?

Why kill Dooku? Why did Dooku meet with Sidious despite knowing he was going to kill him? Why alienate all your supporters? It's just plot stupidity for the sake of moving to the next scene.

I don’t understand what they could be criticising this story about, while some characters have their personalities or motives slightly changed everything seems to well written. Love your chapter and there is many more to read.

What is this chapter? What are they talking about? Why a sudden emo moment?

Bro, you don't just kill people because it is good for character development.

I was not expecting this, but it was welcomed with open arms. This was great, reading Vader insult the council is always a joy, and Gui Gon is right, yoda while wise isn’t the smartest person and with Mace being as hot headed as his IRL counterpart it’s understandable why in every timeline the council rejects Anakin.

I know I don’t have to say this but I truly love this story so far.

Damn, I enjoyed this fight scene, I wonder how Qui Gon’s conversation with the council is going to go now that Anakin’s “father” is a sith and a powerful one at that. I’m truly glad that there are over 60 chapters because this is really good story.

I wonder how you are going to play with this story now, either you are going to diverge or you will continue with the canon timeline

I wasn’t expecting this type of quality of work, but I am happy to admit I was wrong. Also poor guy, Vader left him and he starved to death, not because Vader wanted to kill him but because he he FORGOT, lol.

Can’t wait to read the rest

Lol, Vader is currently older than his Mom right now and he still obeys her, I wonder why it’s always like that.

A great chapter I have to say, can’t wait to read the rest of the available chapters.

This is really a great story
Best star war fan fiction ever
I hope for a sequel!

The interaction between Padme and Vader is amazing.

No Padme got hurt.

Darth Bane's Holocron

What I am confused by is that Vader seems to be completely consumed by the dark side again. After his rebirth he seemed much more neutral, though still using it, and unable to be influenced by the emotional feedback of the dark side. Now he's just a typical Sith again with no individuality from the party line. He isn't going his own way like the introduction would suggest.