YESSSSS this is exactly what I was waiting for! Lol

In every time travel anakin/Vader fanfics I always wanted him to take Maul as an apprentice and actually teach him because the night sisters would be a great Allie and Maul with his actual potential and sidious ruined

And somehow, it did sink in until just now, how petty it is that you have made Vader

Eh. The story falls off after this point. You should’ve just killed the AI and left maul alive. It’s so boring now. You should have left some mystery left, but you killed off all your unique characters. I admit you jebaited me before, but you cannot bring back maul or Bellatrix from the dead, or maul’s brother who’s name I’ve already forgotten due to lack of character development. Decent story, lack of world building and character development. Hope it’s developed.

Bellatrix was an unnecessary advancement in your story. Unneeded. Made it wack and drawn out. Good that you killed her.

As I thought. I suspected after writing my review you wouldn’t make such a large error, and that you killed him on purpose to trick Sidious or something. Well that ain’t what happened, but eh. You jebaited me for a second there. Though your spelling errors are still there and really have no excuse.

Emotional whiplash that was unnecessary. You could either have feral’s explanation or Vader killing one of the brothers, but feral said they would only die if his family was harmed. Breaking the continuity and lessening overall investment in the story from ALL readers. Don’t believe me? Look at how “The last Jedi” made lifelong lovers of Star Wars turn up their noses at the last movie. I would have though this massive continuity error simple, also having the brothers be kind then having one killed was, like I said, unnecessary emotional whiplash. Just because something was unexpected does not make it a good plot point. Palpatine was unexpected in The rise of Skywalker but nobody liked that movie. I am using popular failings of story writing and development to hopefully help you write. Try not to make such large continuity errors next time.

Love the wedding present lol

I don't know if you still read the reviews for this thing but if you do could you give Belle a happy ending with Vader she deserves it.

yea bro try not to multiply okay

Did she lose her sense of self since she didn’t recognize Maul? Interesting...

Man I feel pity for her, she only wanted her master to be safe even if it meant to go against him but she can’t comprehend humans true emotions and logic meanwhile Vader considered her a friend before her betrayal and had grown attached to her but he doesn’t allow disloyalties... in the end they were both misunderstood... I am sad if she was completely erased to not even survive

Didn’t expect that to be her plan, but even then could Vader just forget about Padme? Unlikely, but it would make Vader’s existence after Sidious’ death more happy or endurable

I too curious to know what deal was made, I have some theories but none where it perfectly puzzles into Anakin’s reaction about what Ferno asked of him and how Vader and him would react if he was Vader (bad pun)

Vader is an OP boss, can’t help but think Bella just made all worse by giving Palpatine more time to solidify his position.