Reviews for Free from Force
Guest chapter 31 . 10/28/2020
Emotional whiplash that was unnecessary. You could either have feral’s explanation or Vader killing one of the brothers, but feral said they would only die if his family was harmed. Breaking the continuity and lessening overall investment in the story from ALL readers. Don’t believe me? Look at how “The last Jedi” made lifelong lovers of Star Wars turn up their noses at the last movie. I would have though this massive continuity error simple, also having the brothers be kind then having one killed was, like I said, unnecessary emotional whiplash. Just because something was unexpected does not make it a good plot point. Palpatine was unexpected in The rise of Skywalker but nobody liked that movie. I am using popular failings of story writing and development to hopefully help you write. Try not to make such large continuity errors next time.
Speedster1014 chapter 26 . 10/26/2020
Love the wedding present lol
Bob chapter 1 . 9/29/2020
I don't know if you still read the reviews for this thing but if you do could you give Belle a happy ending with Vader she deserves it.
Darkeous chapter 28 . 9/30/2020
yea bro try not to multiply okay
Kuro.435 chapter 49 . 9/2/2020
Did she lose her sense of self since she didn’t recognize Maul? Interesting...
Kuro.435 chapter 48 . 9/1/2020
Man I feel pity for her, she only wanted her master to be safe even if it meant to go against him but she can’t comprehend humans true emotions and logic meanwhile Vader considered her a friend before her betrayal and had grown attached to her but he doesn’t allow disloyalties... in the end they were both misunderstood... I am sad if she was completely erased to not even survive
Kuro.435 chapter 47 . 9/1/2020
Didn’t expect that to be her plan, but even then could Vader just forget about Padme? Unlikely, but it would make Vader’s existence after Sidious’ death more happy or endurable
Kuro.435 chapter 46 . 9/1/2020
I too curious to know what deal was made, I have some theories but none where it perfectly puzzles into Anakin’s reaction about what Ferno asked of him and how Vader and him would react if he was Vader (bad pun)
Kuro.435 chapter 45 . 9/1/2020
Vader is an OP boss, can’t help but think Bella just made all worse by giving Palpatine more time to solidify his position.
Kuro.435 chapter 44 . 9/1/2020
Wow, Iexpect3d her to trato be subtle but this is subtle put openly going against him...
Kuro.435 chapter 43 . 9/1/2020
This growing Sith Order if it could go to its peak, it could rival the Jedi Order in numbers and perhaps not be seen in contempt like the Sith are now looked to.
Kuro.435 chapter 42 . 9/1/2020
Jedi are too stupid, it was because Anakin warned them that there existed Order 66 which would mean doom to all Jedi that they were even slightly preparedif they had been completely prepared they wouldn’t have fallen, perhaps would have sustained some casualties but only a paltry number in comparison to what they suffered now... they are too self-absorbed to just accuse anyone just like they did Ahsoka when they are supposed to be keepers of peacemasters who can detect truth from false
Kuro.435 chapter 41 . 9/1/2020
Hope this won’t turn the whole galaxy against Anakin, Either they find out the truth or Vader will take all responsibility
Kuro.435 chapter 39 . 9/1/2020
Maul after being choked like: wtf, she isn’t anything to you, now you talk about inappropriate thoughts? Like you hadn’t murdered hundreds of lifeforms?
Kuro.435 chapter 38 . 9/1/2020
Way to go Anakin, it took along time for him to say his mind, always being oppressed by the supposed Jedi that knew everything
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