This is the ending I wanted. It was frustrating to hold on and hope for this to work out, but it was worth it in the end. I honestly don’t know if that makes it good or bad writing that some of the twists towards the end made it look like this was an impossibly. I’m not gonna read the dark ending bc this was completely satisfying and I don’t want to ruin it

My man maul acting like a discord moderator with all these ‘my kitten’ flying about

Not even the full might of the darkside is able to overcome the protective instincts of mamma schmi xD

I’m only nine chapters in but I have to say it. Your Vader is a terrible shit and I Love Him lollllll. I feel it’s only reasonable that he d be very pro-violence and ridiculously powerful after all he been through. Good job.

I am glad that the light ending is 'canon' for this story. This dark one is interesting and tragic and has some merit. But the light ending feels better overall. Though I would have been interested to see what DV would have done if he had a second chance to survive the lightning in RotJ.
Thank you for the great story!

young ani wouldnt fall to palp because vader wouldnt allow it..also he wouldnt fall to pal easier if he was not a jedi cause there would be nothing and no reason to fall.
no been a ''true'' jedi no reason to keep his love for padme secret, no reason to not tell that they are amrried and with child. training in the force with some jedi connections and light aspects but not the strictness and overbearing of the order.
the reasons anakin fell is 1 he is selfish but also very damn protective processive and caring[even as vader it just wasnt as clear cause palp would use it against him]
2 to save padme and later the kids
3 cause the jedi in his midn were holdign him back and basiclaly all but forced him to turn dark.
4 the OG flims and his destiny to create that which borught peace..if only for a time[ i.e luke leia and their kids]
5 was on the same planet as palp througout his life. and trusted him.
6 his emotions and connections and the whole thing with his mom
so if jin lived and was no longer a jedi or at least on under the aegis of the order how would palp groom him? if anakin was hardly on the capitual? had his father and jin to guide him could see his mother,could be open about things with padme and about padme? he wouldnt then that not factoring in if he fall it wouldnt be as worse as he did vause it would be under the tutolege of his older self not palp. also you cant really breed force sensitive clones, it just doesnt worfk unless a master alchmist does it even then it wont truly be what you wish and leaves ot much room for the clone to disobey.
for prove just read what happens in the forced unleashed games.

why kill jinn he lift the order and wouldnt of bene better for young ani to be taught by him instead of angst sorrow greif and gulit shame and anger filled obi? i mean vader knows the path that leads to why would he submit his younger self to that?
also jin sabre was green not blue

His dark side makes plenty of sense. Torture is a well known way to make a Jedi fall.

This has been the best story so far!
Thank you for writing it !

Bro, I absolutely LOVED this chapter! I cannot stop smiling after reading it!

It seems like a stupid oversight that he wouldn't actually make though

Sith are able to love and there have been many that have Darth Malgus and Darth Raven both spring to mind.

They look at love as a weakness that other can exploit and this is mainly due to other sith willing to kill each other over nothing.

He can be on both light and dark I hate that they picked one or the other.

Wait, you fixed it in this chapter. Noice

I'm gonna give this a try despite the cancer of the "" ugh